Hey guys, heres a little something I have been working on, its based on the Titan in BF2142, and personally, I think I made it too much like the titan, but oh well.







The hanger has 2 pelicans, 2 pelican-ready scorpions and 4 pelican-ready warthogs.
Any and all crit is accepted and appreciated.

There's not much too it, at least that I can see. It looks like 2 big rooms basically. I would suggest adding more rooms/corridors.

It's a WIP.

And you probably haven't played Battlefield 2142, it effectively is just a giant room with a bunch of hangars and corridors.

Well how is 3/4 rooms and one corridor fun at all?
And why even have vehicles? It looks like a relatively small map.
Edited by UnevenElefant5 on Sep 19, 2009 at 03:25 PM

They might just be static objects.

Please note that this is just a very small portion of the map.

Ah, then disregard my criticism, I thought that was going to be the entire map. I would suggest adding some detail to the walls and floor though.

Yeah, details on the walls have been eating me alive, I have no ideas for them lol

Try pipes and maybe an inaccessable (or accessable, your choice) observation room on the wall.

Looks VERY boring and basic.

That was so helpful. /sarcasm

Tell him what he needs to do.

Well if you were smart, you would infer that it needs more detail.

If you had read the thread, you would have realized that I had suggested two ways to add more detail, and that I knew already.

This ship obviously needs a big room filled up racks of missles and bombs, along with rocket ammo and high explosive weapons and centering the room, a big WW2 styled nuke with a happy face on the tip. The room should be lit with a dim red light and pipes running along the edges and center of the room, sort of like a submarine. :U detail :U

lol, so basically a room with this in the center:

I have added detail and some pipes, and I have added a observation room:

Edited by RJ00125 on Sep 19, 2009 at 09:09 PM

Make the pipes 8 sided.

Do you see why you got banned now? Seriously?

Nah.

I'm with KID on this one.

Stop using bevel for details, you are making me mad. The only cool thing is the corridor on the right.



Grow up.

Actually, he used them better then most people on this site. He used the properly, and made a decent wall trim out of it. Not to shabby, just apply smoothing. Newbkilla is right about the inset in between the trim and the doors though, don't do that, it dosent look so hot. It's coming along decently, just learn to use more tool inside of max so your scene can be more interesting, and that you can expand your ideas.

90% of your posts are pure stupidity/useless.

Please stop.
Edited by AlwinRoth on Sep 19, 2009 at 11:18 PM

make the map a little more human-themed, if you need to skin it later.

Observation room should be more squarish, like a control tower or something. With an overhang.

^ the one you have now looks like a glass bowl filled with water so try it more square and not just blank on the inside

i'd add some fittings to that pipe...something like this:




and maybe some trusses or girders on the ceilings.

ok, this is weird, I opened up my max file, and whenever I rotate my camera around the model in perspective, the models dissapear and it just shows the box outlines, and my model looks like it has opacity to the material, but I have checked the materials....?

Better than me?
Heh... that's all most of my maps were xD

turn off adaptive degradation. its in the views tab.

Just a little update:

ahh you listened to me :D looks good but i think the door insets looked better than without them. or maybe its just the shape of the relief around them that could use some work

chamfer door corners?

2 weeks and 4 days nearly..

any progress?