
Advancebo
Joined: Jan 14, 2008
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Posted: Sep 16, 2008 09:25 PM
Msg. 1 of 15
Well, this is a Reflections project im working on for school. I need crit. Im aiming for nationals :P this is a small fire scene ive been working on in 3ds max using particles. I plan on improving on this. And maybe add in chief warming his hands on the fire Edited by Advancebo on Sep 16, 2008 at 09:25 PM
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Ro0ster
Joined: Jan 21, 2008
is a rooster
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Posted: Sep 16, 2008 09:34 PM
Msg. 2 of 15
I don't like the snow. And the mountains needs more mountainess in the textures.
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Advancebo
Joined: Jan 14, 2008
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Posted: Sep 16, 2008 09:37 PM
Msg. 3 of 15
i didnt use textures :P, ive been experimenting, and every single material u see was made in the 3ds max material editor. i cant seem to fix the snow without messing up anything else. also i plan on making a stone material and mix it with the snow for the mountains
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corndogman939
Joined: Apr 6, 2007
Using the same avatar since 2007
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Posted: Sep 16, 2008 09:54 PM
Msg. 4 of 15
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This, nothing is really reflecting. Maybe add some Ice and change the materials to make it more reflective. Work on the lighting a lot to make it perfect.
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Dhark
Joined: Feb 2, 2008
I believe in Dennis Powers
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Posted: Sep 16, 2008 10:05 PM
Msg. 5 of 15
fire isnt really looking good either
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Officer egg
Joined: Mar 16, 2008
Dancing is forbidden.
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Posted: Sep 16, 2008 10:17 PM
Msg. 6 of 15
Good start, I like the setting :D
Just needs new textures, is all.
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Advancebo
Joined: Jan 14, 2008
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Posted: Sep 17, 2008 06:48 AM
Msg. 7 of 15
i havent seen snow in 5 years D: dam global warming
also "reflections" is not really a reflection, its just a thing my school does annualy to motivate students Edited by Advancebo on Sep 17, 2008 at 06:57 AM
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Tuaha
Joined: Aug 1, 2008
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Posted: Sep 17, 2008 09:03 AM
Msg. 8 of 15
Quote: --- Original message by: AdvanceboWell, this is a Reflections project im working on for school. I need crit. Im aiming for nationals :P this is a small fire scene ive been working on in 3ds max using particles. I plan on improving on this. And maybe add in chief warming his hands on the fire Edited by Advancebo on Sep 16, 2008 at 09:25 PM That is damn good
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Enzo03
- Screenshot Guru -
Joined: Aug 3, 2007
I'd rather go without than take what you'd bring.
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Posted: Sep 17, 2008 06:01 PM
Msg. 9 of 15
That fire looks god-awful. Fire =/= mud.
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Dwood
Joined: Oct 23, 2007
Judge Ye Therefore
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Posted: Sep 17, 2008 06:41 PM
Msg. 10 of 15
The orange needs to be more centered around the base of the logs + there needs to be more smoke than red instead of it simply fading off.
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DarkHalo003
Joined: Mar 10, 2008
All ARs Need Green Little Buttons.
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Posted: Sep 17, 2008 06:43 PM
Msg. 11 of 15
Quote: --- Original message by: ty Snow looks like white and blue sand... Wait, how about making it into sand? Hell yes another trippy map. You should use that sky while you're at it too.
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Advancebo
Joined: Jan 14, 2008
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Posted: Sep 17, 2008 09:47 PM
Msg. 12 of 15
hargy for marshmallows 
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OpsY
Joined: Feb 19, 2007
Frobisher Bay
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Posted: Sep 20, 2008 10:08 AM
Msg. 13 of 15
Snow is usually bland white with dirt on it if it's been around for a while. and by bland white, mean BLINDING white. 
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OpsY
Joined: Feb 19, 2007
Frobisher Bay
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Posted: Sep 20, 2008 07:14 PM
Msg. 14 of 15
Just google for some pictures.. Snow is pure white:D The only way it gets ''Holey'' is when you walk on it or dirt accumulates 
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DEEhunter
Joined: Dec 16, 2006
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Posted: Sep 20, 2008 08:17 PM
Msg. 15 of 15
The fire. It fails. Use Fume FX if your not to nub to learn it.
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