welll Amazingcuziam, here is ur crit:
start over. when u do keep the following in mind:
[]would u be able to use this comfortably and effectively(handle is straight and completely uncomfortable for a gun

[]clip is important. if it curves make sure it has the same degree of curve tru out.if its straight make it straight

[]the perpendicular grip is blocking w/e that screen ma bob is on teh side. make it vertical instead of horizontal.

[]gun itself is pretty much a box , add detail to it, look at perspective drawings and images of models and real guns to get an idea of depth and detail

[]that strut which blocks the clip should be part of the main model and be shaped ina way taht doesn't make removing and inserting the clip difficult(especially when its animated)

here is one of my other models that should serve as a good guidance, its not amazing liek some of the ones here, but u should get the general idea:

That the one I had you do? If so have you done anything with it? If you have I would like to see. If not that's fine.

Crit: The right hand looks a little off from what I see. Left hand looks good. Maybe a little high but that's probably just me.


-Skidrow

Explosion tags only affect certain things, like vehicles, weapons, and bipeds. If you try to push scenery, it's not gonna work.

I know that. I was trying to push a warthog.

Battle Rifle Origins

http://a.imageshack.us/img255/7832/eliteorigins.jpg

Models and textures by Bungie
Edited by HDoan on Sep 6, 2010 at 06:54 PM

my reply according to 'HunterSucks' use which was banned earlier:

DOAN, IT SUCKS ASS!! ITS A RIP!!

Just kidding. Proper reply:
Origins look good perfect position imo.

I haven't done much with it, been too busy to do anything but post on these forums really.

that lighting.

cant wait to see them ingame,btw you forgot to credit teh lag for rigging the model from scratch and editing it a bit.

There's something I don't like about the texture... it looks way too contrasty. Other than that it's quite nice.

Its just the super epic lighting. You'd see something like that in Halo 3 with the right lighting conditions.

Too high, angle looks off. Rotate it to the left a bit, and move it down. You're showing off the most unattractive part of the gun D:


Looks good :D

The thumb seems like it's curled up way too much...

You're right about the bad angle (i've fixed that), but if I move it down, it won't be pointing towards the middle properly, which is quite unsightly. If I try to rotate it to point towards the middle, it looks crappier.

Carbine wasn't made to point towards the middle.

lol, my origins never pointed towards the center.



Broke's also don't point directly towards the center O.o

fine -_-

i'd better delete that sphere then...



does this cut it?

low res so that it would fit the image properly.
Edited by AGLion on Sep 6, 2010 at 11:33 PM

I spent hours rendering out a perfect video of the animations that amounted to many MB of data and hours of uploading, so that you damn people could watch it in 720p...and you take a picture of the lowest-res one there is >_>

It'll scale it down (as it has), so taking a picture of the 720p video in the regular Youtube video viewport would work just fine.

There wouldn't be all the fuzziness you see in it right now.

I'm sowwie ._.

tbqh, I made that picture at the time when YouTube changed its appearance, and without the easy to find HQ button, I kinda passed over it lol.

@ AGLion

Your origin appears to be pointing down. Move it down, point it up a bit.

lmfao ! xD

I'm feeling the ban u_u

lol I hope for you ^^

Lmao, I worry for you. You must have no friends. Aha! Damn, some scary and weird people on the internet Lulz.

Im scared, does this guy wanna bum me or something? :(

you are amusing sir
just ignore that guy
he got no life no friends nothing and because that he have to injure/annoy people over the internet to feel cool.
i think nobody likes him and beat him in school
and how old he is..hmmm..lemme guess around 10 or 12?
i recommend professional help.
if someone in this forum would know him in real life i think he wouldnt do that cause he got no balls and would be scared.
thats all i have to say at the moment.

k
think what you want to think

What the? 2 double posts and a triple? Interesting.

there was posts by a troll in between, when he got banned, and his account removed his posts were too, thus giving the illusion of multi-posts

Sorry for that =S

Which is why it is important to think before you post and follow the posting guidelines
http://forum.halomaps.org/index.cfm%3Fpage=topic&topicID=27378



If your response looks like a spam post then you run the risk of having ALL your posts deleted with a single click since I do not take the time to differentiate between ignorance and malice: Spam is spam and it will be deleted.

Edited by Dennis on Sep 7, 2010 at 04:36 PM

Ahh. That would do it.

I was looking around and came up with a project I dropped awhile ago. I even have some pics.

Polys and Tries: Way to high right now. About 202,380 of both.

I guess it says in the pictures.

http://img715.imageshack.us/i/3dsmax2010062021025350.jpg/
http://img375.imageshack.us/i/3dsmax2010062021034031.jpg/
http://img294.imageshack.us/i/3dsmax2010062021030781.jpg/
http://img541.imageshack.us/i/3dsmax2010062021031743.jpg/
http://img36.imageshack.us/i/3dsmax2010062021032225.jpg/

Wadda ya think?


-Skidrow

boxy on the back, and did you use the smg handle for the sniper? seriously?

why are the normals on the stock flipped backwards.

With gamma's origins , he makes the person holding them never seem relaxed. It's like they're holding their shoulder to the stock much tighter. Not necessarily a bad or good thing.