fail post (mine originally). also

http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/167/a/7/Assault_Rifle_GoW__Concept_by_Newbkilla.png
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/120/c/c/Sniper_Rifle_Gun_Concept_by_Newbkilla.jpg
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/120/f/f/M16_3d_Model_by_Newbkilla.jpg
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs51/f/2009/290/2/5/P90_SMG_by_Newbkilla.jpg
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs48/f/2009/199/b/9/Benelli_M3_Shotgun_by_Newbkilla.jpg
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs47/f/2009/199/2/6/Halo_3_Assault_Rifle_by_Newbkilla.jpg
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs50/f/2009/290/5/6/Bear_Grylls_Knife_Final_by_Newbkilla.jpg

Just introduced you to another xD
Edited by Newbkilla on Sep 2, 2010 at 10:34 PM

good stuff. I like the Halo 3 assault rifle.

lol i think that's like 2 years old hahah. josh'll remember it i think.

Custom Energy Sword,low poly.

looks a little bit too low poly maybe, will there be electricity between the points?

yes,this is the stripped down version because my comp. wasnt happy and shutdown while i was rendering it with textures and stuff on.

@newb: yup :)
@1337: here is about the only crit I can give you. Don't use side views to model things. I can promiss you. It will turn out flat. Go ahead and make an ugly weapon, and learn from it instead of copying a side view.
As far as me and hunter having 'talent'... Honestly there are a bunch of people on these 2 sited that are the same or better. Hell, I go on some other art sites and I feel ahamed of my work. Not that it's even great. My low poly is to low and I have to many floaters on my high. Just goes to show, that even though I made mistakes making something crappy, i learned from it. I hope I don't sound like a douche. And hunter don't take it the wrong way, love your models. (yours to newbkilla. =3)

-typed on mobile so might have mistakes. :p

We shud make like a Man VS wild map, using bear grylls knife as your wep (by newbkilla), jk but it would be funny though

Looks terrible without textures and or shaders.
Edited by pakar45 on Sep 3, 2010 at 11:30 AM

read my post,I said this is WITHOUT textures or any of the other stuff,its also a 3ds max render -.-

Not bad actually from what I can see. Looks a little pointy in places but I guess that is because it is low poly.


-Skidrow

I can't model, but I sure can draw really well. (Btw, this is made in paint, I'm good at using that to.)

you can't call it a low poly, if you dont have a high poly subd model to bake it to. :\

and don't make it a flat plane, thats just dum, add a bulge running down the middle of the sword blades.

its not a flat plane,its just because I set transparency to 60 and then rendered using advanced lighting which makes it look flat.

Low poly doesnt means low quality, you could make the handle much nicer just by giving it some consitency or w/e. blade is cool, handle strange.

So just because "don't have a high poly sub model to bake it to" means its not low poly then what is it? If there are not very many polys then it is low poly. If there are tons of polys then it is high poly.

So what is it if it isn't low poly?


-Skidrow

drawing won't get it ingame, will it?

Ya never know...

No, but it's fun to draw them

I'ma kill you with mai 2d reach AR !

lol, nxt thing you know ppl on utube use this in their pivots.

haha i was just showing to him past work that I can model. those are pretty old. I really enjoy environment work better than guns anyway, because you can seriously be as creative as you wwant. but yes, my one gun in particular is just like 1337's, it is flat and all, loooks awesome from a side view, but in a fp postion, its like a 12 year olds boobs. look at perspective viewed images of the guns, it will really help.

the only thing I'd suggest is cropping your images. lot of wasted space.

You know the funny thing is, that is exactly what I use it for XD

A pivot?

Like this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZLmWVmXLYEc

Reload:
http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9073/reload.mp4
Edited by Gamma927 on Sep 4, 2010 at 04:59 PM

wow, thats the first animation by broke that really impresses me. Good stuff, now do a reload-empty. Also, is this concept really from reach or is it something you made up?

Something he made up.


Edited by Gamma927 on Sep 4, 2010 at 05:22 PM

I'm not a huge fan of the magazine-out, waaaay too lively. I doubt anybody would attempt to take out the magazine like that anyway, looks like it would damage the weapon.

But the model is quite amazing.

It's his style, lol.

The concept is so cool ! =D

Carbine origins w/ random sky.

I'm no good at origins.

It makes no sense how the bolt is at the front, or even why this even has a bolt. The SMG is caseless so it doesnt need a bolt to push and eject casings because the smg has none...

Plus, you cant have the bolt at the front, unless the clip feeds into the font (making it very VERY inaccurate unless without a long barrel.)

E:
no offense... Its a great concept, but how the gun works is something that should be known at basics before you start concepting....

No offense.
Edited by Shade117 pro on Sep 4, 2010 at 07:06 PM

Love the fluidity of the reload. :impress: