
abkarch
Joined: Mar 20, 2010
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 07:54 PM
Msg. 1 of 13
Just thought, since i couldnt find one, to start a thread to show off animations. ill start, i made this in a few minutes. if you cant tell, its a one shot to the back of the head then melee...im new to animating, so critisism instead of "you suck"s help. for some reason, its playing to fast. but u get the gist.
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PVT Jenkins
Joined: Feb 23, 2009
Advance!!!!!
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 07:58 PM
Msg. 2 of 13
Thats ausome except for the lowering of the weapon type thing
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ODX
Joined: Jul 26, 2007
A rare sight, indeed.
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 08:02 PM
Msg. 3 of 13
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abkarch
Joined: Mar 20, 2010
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 08:04 PM
Msg. 4 of 13
heh, if you read, youd know what the hell that is. even if its not very good.
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Echo77
Joined: Jul 20, 2010
Humble thyself and hold thy tongue.
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 08:04 PM
Msg. 5 of 13
GREAT! I always knew Halo needed a "Hangover" animation! XD
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abkarch
Joined: Mar 20, 2010
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 08:07 PM
Msg. 6 of 13
i just love how the people on this forum give constructive critisism!
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ODX
Joined: Jul 26, 2007
A rare sight, indeed.
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 08:33 PM
Msg. 7 of 13
...I just LOVE how ignor-
Sorry, force of habit to be an ass now-a-days. What exactly am I suppose to 'criticize?'
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abkarch
Joined: Mar 20, 2010
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 08:38 PM
Msg. 8 of 13
the gif shown...?
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Maniac1000
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Joined: Feb 24, 2007
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 08:45 PM
Msg. 9 of 13
Make it slower and smoother.
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Amazingcuziam
Joined: Apr 16, 2010
Sup.
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 08:50 PM
Msg. 10 of 13
Quote: --- Original message by: Maniac1000 Make it slower and smoother. Yes, and also i would suggest making it look more like the wrist of the right hand is moving (not just the gun) along with moving the gun forward more once its at the end. Also i would suggest a small amount (not too little though) of rotation on the gun, to make it look more "Lethal". But that is just my person preference. Its fairly good taking into account that you didn't spend much time on it :)
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ODX
Joined: Jul 26, 2007
A rare sight, indeed.
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 09:01 PM
Msg. 11 of 13
Quote: --- Original message by: abkarch the gif shown...? It's a spazzy animation from yet another new animator. What am I to say? Make it less spazzy?...
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doompig444
Joined: Mar 22, 2010
Mornië alantië
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Posted: Sep 27, 2010 11:07 PM
Msg. 12 of 13
If I hadn't read the description, I would have thought it was some sort of posing animation. Not a good sign.
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abkarch
Joined: Mar 20, 2010
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Posted: Sep 28, 2010 03:16 PM
Msg. 13 of 13
well, its going way too fast. slower, with sounds and muzzle flash, would probably be more convincing. idk tho.
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