With the permission of the author, I am posting a topic of a few edited models. We're just wanting to know what you think of the model, does it look good or not. If you wish to help, try to keep it positive.

1st model


2nd model

Where's the stand for the sniper rifle?

It's been taken away.
EDIT: Because it was pretty much useless IMO.
Edited by Corvette19 on Sep 14, 2009 at 11:27 PM

3rd model - By me - still making the cliffs. still gotta do some bumps in the cliffs.


4th model - By me & mastersotelo

Edited by inkscape13 on Sep 14, 2009 at 11:14 PM

The big circular room looks like you just went crazy with the extrude/bevel tool. Render better also, those renders don't look too great. Also, you still didn't remove that inset on the AR. It's poly wastage since nobody will ever notice it. Render a closer view of the room with the deep pit, since I can't see any details really. Your cliffs could use a little more variation with less polygons. You can remove the hole in the front of the barrel of the sniper, you don't need it. Post wireframes of your mesh too so we can see what it looks like.

E: fix the nonplanars on your cliffs too.
Edited by UnevenElefant5 on Sep 14, 2009 at 11:19 PM

Never learned how to do good cliffs. No one ever taught me how to. Never do bsp's. Mainly only weapon modifications. & Once again, No one helps me on doing bsp's or cliffs or anything.

http://hce.halomaps.org/index.cfm?fid=3591
Problem solved.

You are getting more help than I did. Just look at the cliffs in bungie's maps, or other well-modeled ones (like Grove). With wireframe, of course.

Also:

http://hce.halomaps.org/index.cfm?search=cliff+tutorial
Search is a wonderful thing.

Sounds like every one of my maps

I now shall download all of your maps.
Actually that sounds like my maps too D:
Edited by gruntfromhalo on Sep 15, 2009 at 10:22 AM

The laser doesn't look like it's pointing straight towards the center of the screen.

Who the hell thought of adding that outline kind of thing at the back of the AR near the clip? It is the most retarded looking thing EVER. Liturally. No offence, but why would you add an outline like that?

its "literally", oh and, I think it looks cool. just please tell me that the laser isn't a cylinder, you could just do a plane with that texture applied to it.

Your point being? Maybe i want to sepll it like that, you ever think of that ay?

It's triangular.

@uneven, the laser is just for looks and not for any aiming assist at all, that's what reticules are for :P
I wanted it like that, but I just love the origins as they are...

@Hunter, I personally do like the outlines. You don't like them so do you have any other ideas of what to put there?
Edited by Corvette19 on Sep 15, 2009 at 04:20 PM

If its not for aiming then have it look like its pointing straight. It is very annoying when the laser looks like its pointing at a 35 degree angle.

E: Quote mismatch.
Edited by Headhunter09 on Sep 15, 2009 at 07:32 PM

If the laser is not for anything, why do you have it?

Not crazy about the assault rifle, though I can see use for it

If it's for looks it should at least be accurate.

The laser is going straight, render just makes it look like it isnt. Depends on the angle you look down the laser at... What do you want him to do? Make it 45 degrees down so when you reload the laser is still pointing more or less straight when it should be pointing where the weapon is moved?...

And don't add anything... the outline just looks retarded and gay. And cheap.

^ idgi, please explain that better.

Never mind X(

Move the laser too during the animation.

the laser has its own marker/node w/e u wanna call it.

@headhunter: lolz i'll take that as a compliment of my greatness..... lmao

Wat.
He said you should move the laser during animations.
How is that a compliment in any way at all?

AR with laser equals fail. simply because the AR bullets scatter there not dead laser point hits.

hilarity!

then increase the accuracy in the tag. :O

L2aim? :O

As you see the barrel length has been increased, so we are deff. going to make it much more accurate. Probably tone down the damage too. I'm thinking of 30 round mags?

Good idea corvette.

Update #1: Here's an update on the Assault Rifle. *Note: the red checkers texture is on the model cause im currently trying to UVW Unwrap it so I can make it a complete custom texture*

I also took out some of the extra verts as someone said it had uneccesary details added to it.

Edited by inkscape13 on Oct 12, 2009 at 04:23 PM