
Headhunter09
Joined: May 6, 2008
This is the truth.
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Posted: Jun 2, 2009 10:23 PM
Msg. 1 of 20
model in the cliffs first. Also, make it less bulky cause IMO it doesn't seem like it could really stay up there without falling.
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UnevenElefant5
Joined: May 3, 2008
its been fun yall, i'll never forget this site :')
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Posted: Jun 2, 2009 10:23 PM
Msg. 2 of 20
Bottom is not bad, top is not so much. The ramps are kinda meh, they don't really feel forerunner. The little bands are out of place too. The top is way too thick, and needs more detail. And I spy with my little eye, a nonplanar face on the top.
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someone not important
Joined: Sep 2, 2007
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Posted: Jun 2, 2009 10:25 PM
Msg. 3 of 20
The model looks a bit too simple for forerunner. Try modeling covenant, this community needs more people with those kinda of skills. Arteen is the only person I know of who can model covenant.
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Joshflighter
Joined: May 23, 2009
Former CMT Team Co-Leader
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Posted: Jun 2, 2009 10:33 PM
Msg. 4 of 20
 EDIT: Quote: --- Original message by: someone not important The model looks a bit too simple for forerunner. Try modeling covenant, this community needs more people with those kinda of skills. Arteen is the only person I know of who can model covenant. Uh no. Snafubar can too. Edited by Joshflighter on Jun 2, 2009 at 10:35 PM
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UnevenElefant5
Joined: May 3, 2008
its been fun yall, i'll never forget this site :')
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Posted: Jun 2, 2009 10:36 PM
Msg. 5 of 20
Grunt and Higuy also.
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Advancebo
Joined: Jan 14, 2008
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Posted: Jun 2, 2009 10:57 PM
Msg. 6 of 20
Quote: --- Original message by: Joshflighter EDIT: Quote: --- Original message by: someone not important The model looks a bit too simple for forerunner. Try modeling covenant, this community needs more people with those kinda of skills. Arteen is the only person I know of who can model covenant. Uh no. Snafubar can too. Edited by Joshflighter on Jun 2, 2009 at 10:35 PM Maybe not lean down that far, but just extended outwards more.
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UnevenElefant5
Joined: May 3, 2008
its been fun yall, i'll never forget this site :')
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Posted: Jun 2, 2009 11:01 PM
Msg. 7 of 20
and Nugget.
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Jesse
Joined: Jan 18, 2009
Discord: Holy Crust#4500
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Posted: Jun 2, 2009 11:13 PM
Msg. 8 of 20
Quote: --- Original message by: someone not important The model looks a bit too simple for forerunner. Try modeling covenant, this community needs more people with those kinda of skills. Arteen is the only person I know of who can model covenant. He said That he "KNOWS" of, stop blaming him for limited knowledge (I'm not insulting you, just saying you didn't know).
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Cocaine
Joined: Mar 2, 2009
Can't stop napping.
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Posted: Jun 2, 2009 11:21 PM
Msg. 9 of 20
Quote: --- Original message by: Joshflighter EDIT: Quote: --- Original message by: someone not important The model looks a bit too simple for forerunner. Try modeling covenant, this community needs more people with those kinda of skills. Arteen is the only person I know of who can model covenant. Uh no. Snafubar can too. Edited by Joshflighter on Jun 2, 2009 at 10:35 PM Yeah , that would look sweet. I agree with the post about those ramps , they need abit more forerunner texture. Maybe you could go all the way to make it a CE version of Valhalla. The community appreciates good maps.
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UnevenElefant5
Joined: May 3, 2008
its been fun yall, i'll never forget this site :')
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Posted: Jun 2, 2009 11:34 PM
Msg. 10 of 20
Grunts is already making a Valhalla.
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Cocaine
Joined: Mar 2, 2009
Can't stop napping.
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Posted: Jun 3, 2009 12:01 AM
Msg. 11 of 20
Has he completed the Bases yet? If not , then he could use this one , with some revamping , of course. Couldnt hurt to have 2 Valhallas , the more the merrier.
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wesman
Joined: Mar 18, 2008
no your a freezer
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Posted: Jun 3, 2009 08:35 AM
Msg. 12 of 20
Quote: --- Original message by: UnevenElefant5 Grunts is already making a Valhalla. Yeah um I highly doubt that Valhalla will see the light of day anytime soon.
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UnevenElefant5
Joined: May 3, 2008
its been fun yall, i'll never forget this site :')
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Posted: Jun 3, 2009 09:07 AM
Msg. 13 of 20
Quote: --- Original message by: Cocaine Has he completed the Bases yet? If not , then he could use this one , with some revamping , of course. Couldnt hurt to have 2 Valhallas , the more the merrier. These bases don't look anything like the Valhalla bases :\
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Newbkilla
Joined: Mar 9, 2008
- Artist, Environment Artist, Level Designer -
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Posted: Jun 3, 2009 05:58 PM
Msg. 14 of 20
Missing lots of vital details that would make that look a lot better.
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Headhunter09
Joined: May 6, 2008
This is the truth.
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Posted: Jun 3, 2009 08:04 PM
Msg. 15 of 20
Now you need to make the bottom bigger, lol. Also, make an interior.
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Headhunter09
Joined: May 6, 2008
This is the truth.
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Posted: Jun 3, 2009 08:55 PM
Msg. 16 of 20
yes...
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Advancebo
Joined: Jan 14, 2008
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Posted: Jun 3, 2009 09:01 PM
Msg. 17 of 20
Dont put a hole there, put like a mini spire thing there.
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Cocaine
Joined: Mar 2, 2009
Can't stop napping.
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Posted: Jun 3, 2009 09:30 PM
Msg. 18 of 20
The holes are ontop of the arch thing. The spires need to fill the hole.
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Joshflighter
Joined: May 23, 2009
Former CMT Team Co-Leader
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Posted: Jun 3, 2009 09:31 PM
Msg. 19 of 20
See? There you go. Its looking way more awesome and its going in the right direction. :)
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someone not important
Joined: Sep 2, 2007
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Posted: Jun 3, 2009 09:53 PM
Msg. 20 of 20
The lower part of the structure looks too small compared to the giant... thing on top.
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