It looks good, But the blue one looks a bit to much like a cartoon, and in game the balls are more like up to chiefs' knees those are basically as tall as him in that picture.

They seem large because I'm crouching in the pictures to give you a better angle of the particles in the center.

i think you should make them a little more transparent so you can see the particles better

umm make them more transparent & more duller colors cos really brighted out to the max colors are not the way to go (they make stuff "neoney")

God, everything looks pretty nice, except the sentinel beam

When people refer to the sentinel beam, which video are they referring to?
Top one is mine, with the model taken straight off the sentinel itself.

Bottom one is Polamee and Shade's golden sentinel.

I think the one I tagged with Mythril's particles is best :smug:

Make it come out the weapon origin

the gold sentinel is hard to edit, the particles contrail is messed up whenever i try to fix, i'd usually hve sinow do this stuff but he hasnt been on xfire for while soo yeh... ill try my best to improve =P

It's on my to-do list.

not bad for a week ago.

GENERAL TIP: alot of weapons have this thing called a "hair trigger", which means the slightest tap will cause the weapon to fire a round. i noticed that during your melee you can see the finger on the trigger. doing something like that in real life with your finger on the hair trigger would cause a round to go off. same for the reloading. this is actually the cause of many shooting accidents.

basically, during your reload and melee animations, he should take his finger off the trigger. i know it doesnt matter in a video game, but little things like that in an animation are nice to see. if youve ever played cod 4, you will notice that when firing the RPD, you can see the little flaps on the character's gloves bouncing up and down

So that's why Broke makes his animations with his finger off the trigger...

Yes.

Your origins make it look like the left arm is coming out of the chest. Melee also looks kinda meh :\

I like the gun's position, but not the left arm :P

Stock looks :\

Grip looks uncomfortable, the metal part juts out a good centimeter at least

Very blocky and boring...

Make the grip larger. And make the trigger hole larger.

http://www.xfire.com/video/173c15/

Tags most certainly aren't final.

Its beautiful, except for the bsp. That crap is terrible :(

HEY YOU ARE ACTUALLY MODELING IT!!
ossim work so far! umm the trigger area... make it larger & make the trigger smaller. but man you pwn.
ty for modeling it!

umm n also the grip, make it thicker to match the back of it & thats all
Edited by Shade117 pro on Oct 26, 2009 at 01:39 AM

on xfire. yes
Edited by Shade117 pro on Oct 26, 2009 at 04:24 AM

Wireframe?

Fix your poly distribution. There are wasted polys on the grip, and the rails dont need to be chamfered.

ohh the rails are just to make the gun cooler! lol n sum other parts =P

gotta love teh high action city fights =p

i love i too! lol

What is that weapon going to look like when done? for referance

...............Pure Awesome sauce.Epic win.

Looks... interesting?

Down to it, speaking my mind here:

I personally think the stock is stupid.

The back of the scope is over a rail attachment, seems like that would be uncomfortable for my cheek.

Mostly the back part isn't beautiful.

The butt of the gun is for shoulder mounting =P therfor explaining its the shape (rubber).
also the gun i wanted it to be different to the normal sniperrifle cos this is for force recon who are spec ops troopers, & the sniper is a sopmod.
& also the scope isnt an attachment of the rail, its part of the barrel, because the sniper is a fuel type gun thing... explaining the contrail & the large barrel, look at the original sniper, the barrel is there too.

No I meant how if you looked into the scope your cheek would hit the rail.

I would suggest making the back a little lower and change the stock right now it looks... odd, the general design could work, maybe if you add some rubber over the end.

don't worry, i know what you are talking about. But the rubber will be more clear where it is when textured (by meh) =P

Good... good... exactly to my designs...