Hey guys!
I just registred to tell you about a book I'm writing, called Timeline Unknown.
It's about a group of soldiers (my clan) that were on a mission, and they got into another timeline somehow, blablabla read it at

http://www.timelineunknown.nl.tp

I would like some ideas and your opinion about this guys, I'd really appriciate some inspiration, I'm still writing and I can change the plot anyway I want, lol.
Most info is on the website, so i wont bother telling whats on there in here...
oh and, Peace Through Power Kidz!
Grz Sgt. Haxor.
Edited by BeachParty clan on Oct 12, 2008 at 07:18 PM
* admin added hyperlink

Edited by Dennis on Oct 13, 2008 at 10:42 AM

Although this isn't exactly the correct forum for this kind of topic, I'd like to take my hat off to you for a good idea. I've actually been thinking about doing a similar thing, but didn't want to post something off-topic. Anyway, if this topic isn't locked (which I hope Dennis won't do) by the time I finish reading what you have completed, I'll let you know what I think.

When reading it seems like your in a conversation.

I've noticed quite a few errors which I'm taking note of to put in a message in the guest book. If you don't have an editor you should look into one. If you have one... he/she may need some help.
Edited by Face on Oct 12, 2008 at 08:21 PM

This it totally fan work, so I havn't looked to the official sides of it lol
and yea, it's not really the topic for this forum, but I still wanted to post it since it's a bit halo related - and made cus of my halo machinima ideas
But bungie isn't so easy with making topics so i thought it might fit here ^^
i fixed a storypart where I said 20 years Later, wich shud have been earlier since the planet hasn't dissapeared yet, you'll understand why if you havn't read it all yet ^.^
I was thinking of getting an appearance of master chief in it, but we all know how M$ works, one haloish thingie and you get a mail from them lol, ok that was a random thought.
Edited by BeachParty clan on Oct 13, 2008 at 09:14 AM

Although not Halo CE specific this topic is Halo related and as long as it is kept civil will be allowed.


On a side note: BeachParty clan you might also want to look into the HBO (http://halo.bungie.org/) fan fiction section as well.

thx den, i can call you den right? lol
yea i registred there, that was my first intention, but i cant find the button to start a new topic xD

You can but it is not my name and I most likely will not respond to it..

=( sorry
...And Sgt. Haxor typed a sad face while he felt the same deep inside. Such a mistake will never happen again, he mentally noted. He finished the message with an excuse, wich was a fitting thing to do in cases like this. "How would Caboose respond?" he thought by himself "Probably like some monkey, nevermind" and he finished the message by clicking the blue button that send his electronical message into the deep blue space, an endless space of blue particles wich were uncountable in number...

Hey Sarge. Am I in it? Also. Im doing the [BP] Island soon. I'm going to throw in those modern weapons if they work.