Why do you need a silencer, laser, and reflex sight? And the barrels are inaccurate. You need a trigger. The handle is boxy. I cant tell if theres a foregrip. The display area looks inaccurate and flat. And you should really add the original scope, before doing anything else.
Edited by Advancebo on Nov 12, 2009 at 03:33 PM

there is a foregrip, im doing the silencer laser reflex sight because im coolio

Also, rails are inaccurate.

hhey guys rember me i wasnt around for a while....lol

i bet advancebo is gonan say something negative about it, but my latest model, took 4 hours:

Negative? Its something called "CRITICISM"

Rails look inaccurate.
Foregrip is too long.
Pistol grip is small compared to the foregrip.
The main area could use some bulk.
Dont really understand the use of 2 flashlights.
The bolt seems difficult to grab.

Cant really tell if its a sniper rifle or an assault rifle.

yes i know, just making a statement. lol u didn't say anything u liked, only what u didn't like(thats wat i meant by negative)

rails are inaccurate, atm least of my concerns, will redo them anyways
ya i noticed that just now(fore grip is too long)
bulk(u mean width?)
not two flashlights m8, bottom on is a laser :D( i gotta scale it down lol)
should i make bolt bigger?

will post an update later today or tommrow

Yeah, make the main area of the gun thicker in width, it seems thin.
And make the bolt bigger in length, just a bit, and in radius some.

hows this, is it better?

I'm really bothered by how long the magazine is.

long magazine is only a problem if the weapon is a sniper rifle. You want a nice long mag to hold a lot of rounds.. see what i'm sayin :P

as for criticism, I don't know why your image title is HK416. It just isn't one. You should show us some more angles, in higher resolution. This looks like a pretty good one if you ask me.

I get what you're saying ICEE, but it's still bugging me. Just looks, idk, wierd.

AK magazines are longer than that. you animated an AK i would expect you to know this :(

Maybe its the angle that the magazine is in.

^This. Right now, it kinda looks like:

...|...|
../.../
./.../

Which kinda looks awkward.

Never understood why everyone is so picky about a trigger. The H1 AR, Shotty, Sniper, and rocket didn't have triggers in their models.

It's the magazine, not the trigger.

thats what an ar 15 magazine looks like... sort of...

Except it isn't at a sharp angle.

oh i see what youre saying. you cant see any of the vertical part of the magazine. its just the curve.

this type of look would be nicer imo

neither does the plasma rifle, plasma pistol, needler, or fuel rod for that matter.

^ exactly. So I don't get why people always say "wheres the trigger?"

Because certain weapons that have an area that looks naked without a trigger require it.

It's also good practice to model it if you're planning on going professional with modelling. Obviously for a game where it doesn't even show it won't make much difference, but it's still a good habit to get into, you can easily remove it if you don't need it later.

here we go again.... as i was saying about a month ago, its ok to go a bit above your triangle budget when you make your model, then animate it, because in max its just the model with no other game going on. its ok at this point for the model to have alot of triangles. once you see what the animations will show, THEN you can remove triangles that wont be seen. thats how me and ICEE do it and we have never had a problem.
*que sergent crunch*

<3 what is it, two years now?

hows this:
obviously it wont show it here full size so just go and rightclick>view iamge, then zoom it in..lol



Edited by Geared on Nov 13, 2009 at 02:06 PM

Nice detail, but it seems a little High Poly if you were wanting to get it ingame.

there's a difference between criticism and constructive criticism. you should try giving constructive criticism.

in fact, since it's so blatantly obvious you don't know the difference, here's an idea

your crit

• List everything which is bad/inaccurate.

constructive crit

• List the things you like about it and why
• List the things you don't like about it and why, and how they could be improved

also, make it them feel like they want to continue and improve, as opposed to making them think their model is no good.
Edited by Koo294 on Nov 13, 2009 at 02:29 PM

chances are its not going in halo, maybe in another game....lol thou it be nice if i could aniamte it, gonan use it first for school project, then something else alter on.

The scope looks odd, not that the front is low poly, but it looks too short.
From the holes, the flashlight looks like its just floating there, not actually attached in any way.
The rails are still inaccurate, refer to these to make it accurate:
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/6/6a/M1913A_Rail_CrossSection.svg
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/8/84/Picantinny-recoilgroove-diagram.gif
The trigger is a bit too close to the edge.





idgaf

If that is your attitude, why post at all?

Well, if you don't give constructive crit, you may as well give no crit, as people are just gunna start ignoring you.

I could care less about some people.

i still need to model ophandle and button thing near the handle. other than that its finished. the reflex sight isnt mine. i couldnt care less if the barrels are inacurate or whatnot :/, it isnt good to be custom anymore D:.