
YesUar
Joined: Aug 12, 2013
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Posted: Sep 12, 2013 01:31 AM
Msg. 1 of 15
I had a few Practice Maps before this....
If I Show y'all my First Map, can y'all critique it and give me Advice on how i can improve it ?
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Hobbet360
Joined: Jan 10, 2012
ProTools > ToolPro
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Posted: Sep 12, 2013 05:20 AM
Msg. 2 of 15
Yessir...
Just a warning; some people here don't treat new people how they should and may be overly-criticizing, considering this is your first map.
-But go ahead, there are normal people here too.
:)
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YesUar
Joined: Aug 12, 2013
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Posted: Sep 12, 2013 08:54 AM
Msg. 3 of 15
Quote: --- Original message by: hobbet360 Yessir...
Just a warning; some people here don't treat new people how they should and may be overly-criticizing, considering this is your first map.
-But go ahead, there are normal people here too.
:) I can Handle Strong Critique and even insults I prefer Straight up Honesty Quote: --- Original message by: Tiel It's too boxy. lol I don't know how to make it roundy yet Can YouTube Videos be embedded here ? http://youtu.be/gT86pMbtrEE I'm looking to make another level that you can transport to. A larger Flatter surface with a Big Sphinx in the middle. An Eery looking Grey Sphinx. So i'm looking to learn how to make scenery. If any of you know where i can get a sphinx scenery tag from for now, i'd appreciate it.
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SAS
Joined: Feb 26, 2013
I comment every once in a while
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Posted: Sep 12, 2013 10:21 AM
Msg. 4 of 15
did you make that machine gun tag?
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YesUar
Joined: Aug 12, 2013
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Posted: Sep 12, 2013 11:31 AM
Msg. 5 of 15
no
i don't know how to make tags yet
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killzone64
Joined: Jun 9, 2010
sometimes i miss the chaos occasionally
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Posted: Sep 12, 2013 02:00 PM
Msg. 6 of 15
this for some reason reminds me of quake XD
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SAS
Joined: Feb 26, 2013
I comment every once in a while
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Posted: Sep 12, 2013 03:19 PM
Msg. 7 of 15
Quote: --- Original message by: YesUar no
i don't know how to make tags yet I know that feeling, I'm still learning how to do a lot of things. also, I am curious as to where you got that machine gun tag Edited by SAS on Sep 12, 2013 at 03:24 PM
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rcghalohell
Joined: Feb 25, 2009
I can jump?Weeeee (pop!) (No1 heard from it again)
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Posted: Sep 12, 2013 04:56 PM
Msg. 8 of 15
nice plasma rifle
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YesUar
Joined: Aug 12, 2013
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Posted: Sep 12, 2013 06:57 PM
Msg. 9 of 15
lol
y'all funny
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ChBgt909
Joined: Sep 10, 2011
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Posted: Sep 14, 2013 09:34 AM
Msg. 10 of 15
oh so you managed to fix the crooked selection :D
well i like it, i'm not gonna lie, my first maps didn't even show textures on it nor sky (didn't set up shaders properly but i wasn't aware of that), you had a better start than me so there's plenty of room for you to improve
keep it up! looking forward for a release :D Edited by ChBgt909 on Sep 14, 2013 at 09:34 AM
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YesUar
Joined: Aug 12, 2013
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Posted: Sep 14, 2013 06:32 PM
Msg. 11 of 15
Quote: --- Original message by: SASQuote: --- Original message by: YesUar no
i don't know how to make tags yet I know that feeling, I'm still learning how to do a lot of things. also, I am curious as to where you got that machine gun tag Edited by SAS on Sep 12, 2013 at 03:24 PM I got it from this site i believe Must have downloaded it m247 box mag Quote: --- Original message by: ChBgt909
oh so you managed to fix the crooked selection :D
well i like it, i'm not gonna lie, my first maps didn't even show textures on it nor sky (didn't set up shaders properly but i wasn't aware of that), you had a better start than me so there's plenty of room for you to improve
keep it up! looking forward for a release :D Edited by ChBgt909 on Sep 14, 2013 at 09:34 AM I've made a few practice maps. been at it for a little over a month maybe What can i do to improve ? and what makes it obviously amateur ? Edited by YesUar on Sep 14, 2013 at 06:35 PM
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Tuwdburgaler
Joined: Dec 14, 2006
Leadfoot
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Posted: Sep 14, 2013 08:03 PM
Msg. 12 of 15
I like the vid, the map looks good.
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YesUar
Joined: Aug 12, 2013
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Posted: Sep 14, 2013 08:34 PM
Msg. 13 of 15
Thanks
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YesUar
Joined: Aug 12, 2013
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Posted: Sep 29, 2013 06:19 AM
Msg. 14 of 15
i haven't learned unwrap UVW yet
i did place a ladder in the level with 3DS, but i wasn't able to climb it in the game
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YesUar
Joined: Aug 12, 2013
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Posted: Oct 1, 2013 07:24 AM
Msg. 15 of 15
lol, nice, now i'm walking up walls
thanks
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