It's a tessellated box with extruded faces. It's alright for your first work I guess.

Uhh look, this is going to sound mean, but seriously, that bsp is really bad. Not only is it overly simplistic and looks like something that can be made in ~5 minutes, but you have a bunch of wasted polygons on the sky. And unless you're going to add some more stuff to this map, it looks pretty straight forward with no real gameplay value. Tbh it reminds me of hugeass.

I would suggest you look over the modelling tutorials on this site, as well as the beretta tutorial on fpsbanana. I can't remember the link right now but I'm sure somebody has it. After you look over the modelling tutorials, I would suggest that you get a piece of paper, and sketch out your map. Make a top-down view of your map, and plan out the map. Don't just start modelling with no plan, because that's bound to end up badly.

Again, sorry if this sounds mean, but there really isn't a nice way to put it >_>

Don't even pull this.
Edited by SeL on Mar 19, 2011 at 11:43 AM

reminds me of foundry.

You add more stuff in Sapien, scenery? Not good, stay in Gmax and add more.

No. You say that you need to export, to add more stuff right way you don't. You can't use Blitzkreig, need to use Bluestreak for Gmax.

English is second language. Use Bluestreak for Gmax. And you not need to export yet, add detail in gmax.

I actually see no gameplay value in this map.It's a box with a huge pit in the middle (unless you plan on using it as a testing ground, but no use)

definetly look up modeling tutorials to teach you more a bout the tools that are at your disposal
for example-
selcet and edge hold down shift and drag edges.
select verts and hold shift then move the verts.
click vert click create place verts where you want and create poly's that connect the verts you created.
use the cut tool to help shape poly's.

that's just a few exampes.

how about you show off when you've got more than an inversed, subdivided box with a few extrudes that I could make in thirty seconds

Shape it out and add detail. Please put thought and time into this.

He is stating the problem. You are assuming he's exporting it and then finishing it later.
What would be the point of adding detail if he can't export it?

Why would need to export just yet? Better to have the thing done THEN worry about exporting.

Better to have it done just so that when he tries to export it, he gets................ Open Edges =\

Please don't think we are trolling you, this is real criticism.

Hi guys like my map?

Impressive. The central pillar allows for radial gameplay. Quite innovative good sir.

Hiralis, add me on xfire. Looks like you could use a one-on-one lesson in some of the finer points in modeling and I am willing to help the issue if you want me to rather than just say you suck or anything like most people would/are doing.
My xfire username is same as my username here. If you want to do it, may I recommend teamviewer? It will help more than just explaining and will make learning a lot faster.

Thread jack! On a side note, DEE, it's much too complex. No way that would fit ingame.

Need's moar turbosmoothing......


ontopic: They aren't kidding. Either have a whole bunch in sapien or just add more detail's in MAX. For exporting you NEED to have bluestreak. There is a tutorial with it and it can be found at theghost.halomaps.org

Google Translate? His English is perfect...

Bump?

amidoinitrite

needs more longswords
E: make sure they drop nukes too
Edited by UnevenElefant5 on May 31, 2011 at 07:18 PM

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Check my post number

This isn't 4chan and it gets on my nerves when people treat the forum likewise.

I am sorry to inform you, but your going to run into mass erors with that. (Why are you trying to make a point anyway? I see no point..)

Those back faces are a mess, you should weild them like mad, and your wasting to many poly everywhere. Start target weilding till you see very few to one line on each flat surface (seriously though, why are you trolling?.. and why am I responding when knowing its a troll?)

Best option is to start over again.

Thanks. Will do.
Sorry guys-- back on topic time.

This is not 4chan this type of thing is frowned upon here.

you need to chill and smoke some weed

Exactly do you like that? thats a frowny face!

That would be illegal and also frowned upon here.

-County Patrolman

go on teamviewer when I'm on and I'll show you how to model properly and without boxes