
DarkLord0912
Joined: Jan 17, 2009
Works on bigger and better things
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Posted: May 23, 2009 02:59 AM
Msg. 1 of 21
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NapalM
Joined: Jul 8, 2007
keke
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Posted: May 23, 2009 09:17 AM
Msg. 2 of 21
.. It looks cool, not sure if it looks h3ish though.
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JLtheking
Joined: Mar 4, 2009
imma
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Posted: May 23, 2009 10:14 AM
Msg. 3 of 21
just from the picture, maybe not so much. I rate it 4/10 for halo 3-ishness. I suggest filling in the empty spots with light green or white. And maybe a video maybe?
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Invader Veex
Joined: Apr 11, 2007
i make poast
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Posted: May 23, 2009 10:30 AM
Msg. 4 of 21
No, it does not.
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ICEE
Joined: Mar 1, 2007
Hark!
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Posted: May 23, 2009 01:32 PM
Msg. 5 of 21
Doesn't look halo 3ish. doesnt look bad though. I would probably use that contrail for something other than a hunter ray though.
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iTails
Joined: Nov 26, 2008
The lot of idiots on this forum are veterans
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Posted: May 23, 2009 01:42 PM
Msg. 6 of 21
Quote: --- Original message by: ICEE Doesn't look halo 3ish. doesnt look bad though. I would probably use that contrail for something other than a hunter ray though. Sentinel.
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Karrde
Joined: Jul 30, 2007
Power beyond containing
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Posted: May 23, 2009 01:53 PM
Msg. 7 of 21
It's not glowy enough, and it has too many holes in it. 
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Advancebo
Joined: Jan 14, 2008
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Posted: May 23, 2009 02:13 PM
Msg. 8 of 21
And needs much more color variation.
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iTails
Joined: Nov 26, 2008
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Posted: May 23, 2009 02:28 PM
Msg. 9 of 21
Quote: --- Original message by: KarrdeIt's not glowy enough, and it has too many holes in it.  I would suggest smearing and blurring around the edges of the holes, if that doesn't look good, then Idk.
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DarkLord0912
Joined: Jan 17, 2009
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Posted: May 23, 2009 05:04 PM
Msg. 10 of 21
Yeah Im still learning the paint.net...yeah Im not sure how to add all those things everyone suggested LOL :)... I'll try the blur idea not sure how well that will work??
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NapalM
Joined: Jul 8, 2007
keke
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Posted: May 23, 2009 05:05 PM
Msg. 11 of 21
First of all the color looks way too dark, but its hard to tell since the lighting in your pic and the halo 3 one are way different.
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Karrde
Joined: Jul 30, 2007
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Posted: May 23, 2009 06:53 PM
Msg. 12 of 21
I'll try to find a Halo 3 pic with similar lighting. EDIT: Better? Edited by Karrde on May 23, 2009 at 07:03 PM
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DarkLord0912
Joined: Jan 17, 2009
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Posted: May 23, 2009 08:49 PM
Msg. 13 of 21
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master24a
Joined: Oct 22, 2008
LMT arrazando
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Posted: May 23, 2009 08:56 PM
Msg. 14 of 21
looks better, but still something is missing
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RougeSpartan414
Joined: Sep 24, 2007
Angatar, the Iron-Father.
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Posted: May 23, 2009 08:57 PM
Msg. 15 of 21
Less yellow and more white...
Wow, I can't believe how terrible that sounds.
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Advancebo
Joined: Jan 14, 2008
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Posted: May 23, 2009 09:00 PM
Msg. 16 of 21
You need other color variation with blue, green, and white in it.
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DarkLord0912
Joined: Jan 17, 2009
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Posted: May 23, 2009 09:51 PM
Msg. 17 of 21
What do u mean more color variations??? How do I go about that?
Also the ball form thats suppose to be in the front of the beam is missing not sur how to do that?
And yeah the small red I dont know why thats there cuz theres no red in the bitmap or contrail tag??? It only does that for the Hunter I think??
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new101
Joined: May 18, 2009
All for one and one for all
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Posted: May 23, 2009 10:32 PM
Msg. 18 of 21
I suggest to use the wriath projectile instead of the fuel rod. You can adjust the color to green an mess with the trail to match that halo three screen shot.
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jacknme
Joined: Aug 29, 2008
If you see this, you must be in an old topic
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Posted: May 23, 2009 11:23 PM
Msg. 19 of 21
The outer colour can't be just plain green. Try to make it a mix of variations of green
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NapalM
Joined: Jul 8, 2007
keke
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Posted: May 24, 2009 10:15 AM
Msg. 20 of 21
And scrap all the color besides green.
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iTails
Joined: Nov 26, 2008
The lot of idiots on this forum are veterans
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Posted: May 24, 2009 04:02 PM
Msg. 21 of 21
Like recycle bin was saying (for once in a good while) the bitmap is too straight, you need to give it a radiated leak around the fuel rod.
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