Hey, i just uploaded a map and its called Space Dock and I am just making this thread to see what you guys think of it.
heres the link to it:
http://hce.halomaps.org/index.cfm?pg=3&fid=4233
anyways i just wanted to get your opinion and criticism on it.
(please try to ge gentle with your crit, its my first public map) :)

im trying it now

cool thx also can u tell me how to post images? not links to images but actual images cuz i cant figure it out sorry im such a nub lol
Edited by UnevenElefant5 on Dec 18, 2008 at 07:12 PM

um okay i tried the map its pretty good but i had trouble jumping out of the room with the 2 vents one on either side and its dark and has 2 computerish things one on either side it took like 7 tries to get out of that room oh and to post pic you copy the url of the picture and click that button 3 to the left of the smiley the one with the mountains and sun then click the yellow bar on top of the screen and allow it then the button again and paste the url

meh...its ok, i can't say its really good:
the too-easily accessable nuke weapons make it a very laggy and unbalanced gameplay
the hogs or utterly useless
it would have been cool to drive the pods, or shoot the cranes to make them drop their cargo
the bases are dull, and simple
it's a nice idea, the the gameplay is pretty bad
but i luv the sound of the nuke gun, lolz

this map makes me think about sciophobia
Edited by kev3344 on Dec 19, 2008 at 02:49 PM

The nukes are too easy to find. Remove them or make them VERY hard to get. I like your teleporters. Your texturing sucks, you not only UVW'd it bad but you used forerunner textures on human architecture, which looks bad. The cranes are a nice addition. Did you notice that you scalled it wrong and that the MC couldn't possibly sit in the puny seat. Also some of the objects are not properly attached to the crane. Oh, and your modeling is bad. But do not be discouraged, it is VERY good for a first public release. Most people's first public releases are wwaayy uglier than this.

okay thanks for your crit, sorry i did not even think about the IMMA FIRIN MAH LAZAR gun making the game laggy, and the hogs were a last minute addition, im taking them out now

put the blind wolf in there lolz

the blind wolf died along with the thread lol i never finished it, i couldnt get your texture to work and the gbxmodel tag was messed up :*(