Better renders mb?

il help but i cant really see much with those pics

Just to let you know. It will be impossible. Not really but the chain fences. Just make a box for those and add details on them. you can try to make it 2d. But that's horrible. and it doesn't look that accurate. You got Halo 3? If you do. Go into forge and delete every object. And then fly around and focus on one part of the map. Once done there continue on. Better renders too.

Also. There's no need to make the outside. It will only make it harder. Plus no one is supposed to be out there so no need.
Edited by Newbkilla on Aug 3, 2008 at 10:30 AM

You may have transparency problems with the sky tag

Looks good!

But try to replace the forerunner metal with something more human.

Er. I can tell you, that is not accurate. Where are the doors, and the ceiling and the windows are to close to the bottom. The map is indeed human and is not forerunner. Its a gym :P. The fan windows are not that boxy. And are to close to the ground. And the ventilation system, the pipes on the ceiling are WAY to big.

I say brighten it up a bit. In your screenshots I cant see a darn thing. I CAN see however that the roof isnt attached to the walls at some points and its forerunner metal...

Maybe keep it forerunner. Just for some Originallity. So many people are doing Halo 3 maps so why not go for some originality? Maybe it could be a Forerunner storage facility? Then when the map model and everything is finished make forerunner scenery. Include all the scenery in a map file and upload to halomaps as a blank Forerunner Fiundry. And leave us to play around with scenery placement. Turn Sapien into Forge mode!

So yeah. Keep the Forerunner. Name it something other than Foundry though. Maybe something like "Forerunner Storage Facility 04"

Make some Forerunner Crates and walls and things to use instead of human ones. Or Include human things like Human crates carrying chainguns and turrets. That is if yuor staying with the Forerunner idea :/