
killer kiwi
Joined: Feb 10, 2007
live and let die
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Posted: May 5, 2008 05:10 AM
Msg. 1 of 15
OK it is based on the bases from sidewinder. I am still working on it and just wont a bit of feed back on it. it has a garage underground witch can be accessed from inside the base or from the main door for the garage inbuild teleport sheld lighting ladders I have got into a map for testing if you would like to take a look at ingame here is a link to it http://files.filefront.com/sw+type+baserar/;10136896;/fileinfo.html any and all feed back on this would be cool. outside inside garage part of the base 
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spike15
Joined: Sep 26, 2007
yes!yes!yes!yes!
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Posted: May 5, 2008 06:52 AM
Msg. 2 of 15
needs lots of work textures are bland to small (base texture!!) or to big (floor texture!!) model is ok but can defently be improved. though over all i think its ok.
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gruntfromhalo
Joined: Nov 21, 2007
actual loli
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Posted: May 5, 2008 09:54 AM
Msg. 3 of 15
I agree, the textures arn't good at all (or at least the UVW mapping isn't). But also, is it supposed to be human or forerunner? I see both forerunner and human in it's architechure. Also, you seem to have mixed the textures from both.
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killer kiwi
Joined: Feb 10, 2007
live and let die
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Posted: May 5, 2008 01:39 PM
Msg. 4 of 15
Quote: --- Original message by: selentic 1)Dont mix human and forerunner textures Why not it is a forerunner base that has been added onto by humans. Quote: 2)Your UVs are terrible
well yes why spend a lot of time on it when nothing it has been finilized. Still working on it. Quote: 3)Thats way too boxy, its a really boring and overall displeasing structure. no **** as above Thanks to all for comments but what can be added to it to improve it. Edited by killer kiwi on May 5, 2008 at 01:46 PM
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HaloSlayer
Joined: May 21, 2007
Used to be my H3 Emblem
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Posted: May 5, 2008 01:41 PM
Msg. 5 of 15
wth does ftfy mean?
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darkassassin14
Joined: Jul 23, 2007
El. Psy. Congroo.
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Posted: May 5, 2008 02:27 PM
Msg. 6 of 15
lol yea ^
but the base does look pretty good i made somthing like it in sparkedit with logs tho thats a bad sign but still good base Edited by darkassassin14 on May 5, 2008 at 02:28 PM
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ChocolateNugget
Joined: Sep 29, 2007
im your #1 fan !!
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Posted: May 5, 2008 02:29 PM
Msg. 7 of 15
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darkassassin14
Joined: Jul 23, 2007
El. Psy. Congroo.
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Posted: May 5, 2008 02:33 PM
Msg. 8 of 15
lol ns FTFY
thats funny
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darkassassin14
Joined: Jul 23, 2007
El. Psy. Congroo.
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Posted: May 7, 2008 08:13 AM
Msg. 9 of 15
thats kinda mean huh lol
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darkassassin14
Joined: Jul 23, 2007
El. Psy. Congroo.
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Posted: May 7, 2008 08:25 AM
Msg. 10 of 15
well no but u put it in a mean way and its kinda funny
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Dennis

Joined: Jan 27, 2005
"We are made of starstuff.” ― Carl Sagan
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Posted: May 7, 2008 10:54 AM
Msg. 11 of 15
Quote: --- Original message by: selentic I wasnt aware I was obligated to sugar coat the truth. Edited by selentic on May 7, 2008 at 09:37 AM Not up on your social skills I see.
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Dusinator
Joined: Mar 23, 2008
Abuser of dots and parenthesis.
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Posted: May 7, 2008 12:24 PM
Msg. 12 of 15
Quote: --- Original message by: DennisQuote: --- Original message by: selentic I wasnt aware I was obligated to sugar coat the truth. Edited by selentic on May 7, 2008 at 09:37 AM Not up on your social skills I see. I think sugar coating the truth is only allowed in the Oreos thread currently... ....... On topic, I agree that the base needs better texturing, and it does look boxy. I couldn't model anything remotely close to that myself currently, but that doesn't stop me from saying it's ugly. ... Ugly with potential.
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killer kiwi
Joined: Feb 10, 2007
live and let die
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Posted: May 10, 2008 03:37 AM
Msg. 13 of 15
Quote: --- Original message by: DennisQuote: --- Original message by: selentic I wasnt aware I was obligated to sugar coat the truth. Edited by selentic on May 7, 2008 at 09:37 AM Not up on your social skills I see. It was good adivce BUT good have been put in a bettter way. As this is what I would like to see done with the model. I have restarted the base but can I get feedback on how the garrage should come out of the underground part. 1 just some tunnel with a fourrunner base behind. 2 Or a model like the vehicle base in Halo wars. have the garrage come out with a big ramp and have the base built behind. When I am happy with what i have modeled I will put it on halo maps for anyone to use so tell me what you wont. Quote: --- Original message by: Dusinator
I think sugar coating the truth is only allowed in the Oreos thread currently...
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On topic, I agree that the base needs better texturing, and it does look boxy. I couldn't model anything remotely close to that myself currently, but that doesn't stop me from saying it's ugly. ... Ugly with potential. Thanks for the advice and I agree with you it was crap!!!!!! It only took me 3 hours to make that and just wonted feedback on what to do with it. Edited by killer kiwi on May 10, 2008 at 03:49 AM
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DarkHalo003
Joined: Mar 10, 2008
All ARs Need Green Little Buttons.
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Posted: May 10, 2008 01:09 PM
Msg. 14 of 15
Well, if i could say anthing at all, I would say that the exterior textures need work. They need a steellish slant to the exterior instead of the texture you have in place. But the interior looks pretty good, just keep working on it. :)
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darkassassin14
Joined: Jul 23, 2007
El. Psy. Congroo.
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Posted: May 14, 2008 08:45 AM
Msg. 15 of 15
lets see wat it looks like now. new picture?
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