yays!? need constructive criticism.








Edited by aklass on Feb 1, 2008 at 10:31 PM

why dont you fix your post first.

Fixed =)
Edited by aklass on Feb 1, 2008 at 10:31 PM

Smoothing needs some work. and lighting needs more practice

I suggest adding in a few more details. It looks pretty low polygon right now. You also need to fix your smoothing errors. Besides that, it looks like an awesome model.

Its 2.2k polys right now and I don't need to add anymore details because it can be textured. I just need to fix edge errors and smoothing

No more details eh? Too bad there isn't the 2 polygons for the screen.

I'm by no means a modeler, but it looks like theres some poly wastage. other then that it looks pretty good.

I fixed most of the smoothing by using groups instead of rushing with a smooth map. and I fixed some things I missed when modeling. Hdoan if H3t wants to use it I'll trade you guys for some content.


Edited by aklass on Feb 2, 2008 at 01:12 AM

Stuff like that should go over private messages and when I trade things, I stick with 1 for 1 not 1 for some, also I don't need it.

H3t isnt above using rips

I never said I was or wasn't =/

this isn't a rip I modeled it. Its acutally my first model
Edited by aklass on Feb 2, 2008 at 01:16 AM

I wasn't accusing you of ripping

oh heh I read it wrong you said they aren't above ripping

scale the pics down a bit. it looks nice, needs some smoothing, and how many TRIANGLES does it have. polies dont matter in game, triangles do. i see some triangulation problems and smoothing problems too. other than that, nice job especially for a first

average model. not bad, not great. front of the scope could use more than 8 sides. some wonky smoothing.

also(i have h3 so i know this 4 sure)this is only if its supposed to be h3 looks.
when u showed the model of what it would look like when ur in gamplay or holding the br the gun is a little to high.(this is from ur 1st post)i may be wrong since i havnt played h3 in a while since my xbox360 broke but by what i remember that guns holding place is a little too high try to make it lower(ive never made my own weapon model before so i dont know if its possible, only edited weapons eg projectiles etc.
and when will it be released?
coz its still prety good and i might put it in some of my maps(depends on how good it is when its completed).

Why? Because you can sweep snipe?

Not bad, but that's ripped?

Also, Creativity=magic and not boring. If people would make more original stuff rather than remake stuff that already exists, Halo CE would be one thousand times better.

no it isnt ripped



Second post I fixed most of the probs. It looks smoother. but I see what you're trying to say
Edited by aklass on Feb 2, 2008 at 11:08 AM
Edited by aklass on Feb 2, 2008 at 11:09 AM

i agree with simulacrum. Halo ce would be alot funner if we had all that custom stuff again. Like the old days. Another thing is that ppl are trying to keep making h3 stuff.. Dude, H3 to me was a diapointment almost. I own a copy of halo3 legendary edition.

It really wasn't a dissappointment, it just couldn't be very creative because of Halo 1 and 2.

I just chose it because it was blocky and easy to plane model with

still, i could imagine alot ways it could be better.

Don't listen to the guys who tell you not to do what you want to aklass. You can model whatever you want. Also, directed at the guys who argued about halo 3s battle rifles, just because he models it after it, doesn't mean it has to play like it. Theres no use posting about gameplay flaws in a thread about models.

Woah. O_O That sounds like a lot of polygon wastage. The assault rifle I made only has 990 polygons. I'm not sure how many triangles though. I haven't checked. A wireframe of the model would help a lot too. I'd be able to show you what's wasted, what could go away, etc and I'm sure some of the more experienced modelers could help also. When i made my first weapon I had a lot of wasted polygons, but I soon learned how NOT to waist. :p

In other words, WIREFRAME PLOX!

lol most of the polys are the scope,knobe, and button


Edited by aklass on Feb 2, 2008 at 06:21 PM

What's that folder that says 'H3AR?'

theres no way that thing is 2.2 k polys. triangles possibly, but no.

oh thats my reference folder im modeling an AR now. and yes its 2.2k triangles. or as a editable patch
Edited by aklass on Feb 2, 2008 at 06:48 PM

Ah, see, that makes more sense. Thanks.

no I just need someone to skin, texture, and animate