
Tricky
Joined: Aug 13, 2007
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Posted: Jan 20, 2008 03:55 PM
Msg. 1 of 5
Some early stage renders of my first attempt at a forerunner-esq structure. Any idea for improvements are welcomed Render 1 Render 2 
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spike15
Joined: Sep 26, 2007
yes!yes!yes!yes!
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Posted: Jan 20, 2008 04:17 PM
Msg. 2 of 5
could have put that in the w.i.p.s forum that is already up but anyway it looks good but im not a forerunner expert.
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corndogman939
Joined: Apr 6, 2007
Using the same avatar since 2007
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Posted: Jan 20, 2008 04:25 PM
Msg. 3 of 5
it looks alright. its not forerunner though. your angles are off. forerunners use 30/45/60/90 degree angles. and there is much ugly-ness under those platform things on the sides.
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Tricky
Joined: Aug 13, 2007
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Posted: Jan 20, 2008 05:27 PM
Msg. 4 of 5
Well i guess angles can be amended very easily! Which ugly bits do you mean?
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corndogman939
Joined: Apr 6, 2007
Using the same avatar since 2007
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Posted: Jan 20, 2008 05:46 PM
Msg. 5 of 5
that. try bringing down the parts where i put the red dots to the same height as the part you walk on so its planar. those angles are also off.
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