Floor extrudes would look better as intrudes or just incorporated into the texture

looks good but you should post some pictures of the entire thing

lol, why? i haven't changed the hull hardly any, and i've already posted plenty of pics of it.

ok wel in that case you need to take a very close look at this:


and get some more of those defining details in there such as the edge around the cockpit, the not so flat top part, the details on the side just at the front edge of the wings, your rotors need to be wider and thinner, get the little extrudes on the engines, even if you dont put the gun on the front at least get something there to add interest, note that there is an edge on the bottom off the glass where the wing comes forwards and meets the cockpit edge at more of an angle and the edge further forwards on the side of the cockpit only has a tiny slope to it, the cabin floor is rounded at the edges i think with 4 edges, and you might want to take a close look at the air intakes for the engines on top of the falcon

Edited by G TheFlea on Nov 8, 2010 at 05:11 PM

lol, the whole hull is going to be revamped later (missed a few details and curves due to a bad angled ref...) just figured i'd finish up the assets (finish a different project) and then revamp and release a new model :) (might release this version once the assets are done)

okay good its just the way you said it made it sound like you were going to release it like that.. just dont rush to release it make sure its detailed

Halo Reach pelican [WIP]. Doesnt look like much now but w/e. (btw, this is my first vehicle modeling attempt)

haha, not gonna just wait for me to do it? lol, i was looking forward to making it!

I had the same thought running through my mind lol. You can still make it, I just thought i'd give a shot at modeling other things besides weapons =\

yours will look 10X better than mine :)
Edited by Sergeant 1337 on Nov 8, 2010 at 10:12 PM

thats arguable. oh and UPDAETZ! still using the original hull, will redo later.

lookin forward to it!!

name butcherer. anyhoo, dont expect the new hull too soon, i'd say it'll probably be around friday when i finish it.

your probably right..
i can wait till friday

Falcon hull v2 (bout 15% maybe 20% done). NOTHING IS FINAL.
Edited by Amazingcuziam on Nov 9, 2010 at 08:36 PM

Wow the falcon is looking really sharp man great job keep it up!!

i'll just leave these here...

First picture looks good, wireframe please.
bottom wireframe is wrong:

1. duplicate your model
2. apply push modifier to clone
3. change value to 0.001
4. apply material to clone with Wireframe checked and colour set to black
5. Render

Looks pretty good. I think I see a few smoothing errors near the cockpit, that could just be the render though.

K, got it, will do, and to caboose117, they are not the render sadly, its main because of one or two phantom vertexs, but i'm cool and just fixed it :D. lol i was gonna redo the wireframe for you Hunter, but whenever i did it the way you said, it didn't have all of the edges highlighted :'(
Edited by Amazingcuziam on Nov 11, 2010 at 01:00 PM

Is that your favorite link and tut ever?


I'ma working on a dropship. Major W.I.P. right now. I based it off the Nostromo Starfigher in-case you didn't notice.

Pics:
Sort of insides:

Out side:


Might improve upon it alot.
Edited by Skidrow925 on Nov 12, 2010 at 09:10 PM

Project Sabre is officially a go. I know about the stupid smoothing errors on the front, they don't wanna go away :(.
Edited by Amazingcuziam on Nov 18, 2010 at 07:36 AM

if by "wrong" you mean "different than I personally would do it" then yes

wireframe is wireframe, there's nothing "wrong" with his



I think those are caused by N-gons. don't know how to get rid of them personally, modeling's not really my thing
Edited by HaloIsAHorribleGane on Nov 18, 2010 at 10:39 AM

They are actually as far as i can tell just cruddy shading in the render.

You don't know what your talking about... no one can give crit with that type of wireframe, stop attempting to be smart by being cocky. The link I provided is the proper way to render a wireframe.

You need to get off tbh, your just a troll and don't contribute to any discussions, all you do is flame or be cocky.

He reminds me of the old you, except he doesn't know a bunch of useful stuff like you :D

Funny, because the second thing he posted was actually somewhat correct. Yet he knows nothing? Also I'd have to agree, while it's a poor wireframe to look at for any help, it's technically not wrong, it's a shot of a wireframe of the model. Nothing he said was wrong, cocky, or trolling. So get off your own high horse and leave him to his own opinion. You had yours, he can have his, even if it isn't the same.



What is that? Not meaning it's a crap model or anything that I can't tell what it is, I just don't know what it's supposed to be. Is it a remake of something or is it your own? Because it looks quite interesting.

It's the Sabre from halo reach:

Which explains why I haven't the slightest clue of what it is, haven't played/seen Reach since I played the beta. And I only played it the day before it came out. (Friend had a code. Then I had a bunch of tests, so didn't play, then beta was over. )

first off, FAIL!
Second, you don't really go off giving unhelpful crit anymoar like you used to though.

mmmmmmh. yeeees, let me bathe in your tears

I guess there's no point at all in showing a wireframe like that... he couldn't possibly be showing off his triangulation or his poly count or anything. no way in hell. in fact, the only right way to do it is the way you posted. there's no other concievable way to do wireframes.

oh hey guys, I apparently haven't contributed anything to this forum at all, hunter's apparently read all of my posts otherwise he wouldn't make such a statement as if it were fact

The wireframe wasn't wrong. It was just not at the opportune angle.

Haloisahorriblegane is making Hunter revert to his old ways.

Stay strong, hunter.

Hey Haloisahorriblegame, Wanna 102? I gotta few. HOw 'bout it?