
Karima Narstrom
Joined: Nov 12, 2010
Galloping along the hilltop rode the Narstrom....
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 02:10 AM
Msg. 1 of 36
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spartin115
Joined: Sep 26, 2009
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 02:16 AM
Msg. 2 of 36
Proportion is fine in this one. Maby the eye holes could be a bit bigger. It would be hard to see out of. Otherwise it looks great!
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Skyancez3o4
Joined: Apr 6, 2010
I miss CE
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 02:18 AM
Msg. 3 of 36
It might just be me but it seems like this is based off of something because it seems familiar. Anyways, looks really good, I'd love to see this ingame :)
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UnevenElefant5
Joined: May 3, 2008
its been fun yall, i'll never forget this site :')
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 02:37 AM
Msg. 4 of 36
That helmet is hauntingly familiar. It looks a bit like the Timeshift helmet crossed with the EVA helmet. The whole thing reminds me of mirror's edge for some reason. I think it's the render settings and the large amount of white. Either way, it looks pretty cool.
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Cheddars
Joined: Oct 30, 2010
Rave to the Grave.
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 04:04 AM
Msg. 5 of 36
reminds me of the starwars desert clone
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Shade117 pro
Joined: Jul 2, 2009
Yeah bro (xfire: blue117pro) I can make cubemaps
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 04:36 AM
Msg. 6 of 36
The helmet looks like the commando helm... kinda and a section 8: prejudice helmet....
But yeah, nice work with the modeling, really good quality. The proportions are fine, keep it up! I can't wait to see if textured.
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Spartan314
Joined: Aug 21, 2010
Former biped rigger & FP animator
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 04:47 AM
Msg. 7 of 36
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ally
Joined: Jun 23, 2010
Aye Ready
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 05:24 AM
Msg. 8 of 36
it's different and unusual looking, even if any of it was done by reference of something else, it looks great.
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Cheddars
Joined: Oct 30, 2010
Rave to the Grave.
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 07:34 AM
Msg. 9 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: Karima Narstrom No idea what I'll call it.
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Also the last thing I posted on this fourm that was not male, I was barraged with with some pretty...pretty creepy comments. Lets keep anything relating to the body/proportion out of this ok? just come to think of it. her boobs look extraordinarly big XD. lol plastic surgery by those mexican doctors
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Shade117 pro
Joined: Jul 2, 2009
Yeah bro (xfire: blue117pro) I can make cubemaps
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 08:31 AM
Msg. 10 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: Cheddars just come to think of it. her boobs look extraordinarly big XD. lol plastic surgery by those mexican doctors I wasn't ever going to mention this type of thing but yes, cheddars is right about this. The roundness of the breasts shouldn't be wider than the width of her chest. I'm not trying to be creepy or anything but what's said is said.
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Cheddars
Joined: Oct 30, 2010
Rave to the Grave.
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 08:33 AM
Msg. 11 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: Shade117 proQuote: --- Original message by: Cheddars just come to think of it. her boobs look extraordinarly big XD. lol plastic surgery by those mexican doctors I wasn't ever going to mention this type of thing but yes, cheddars is right about this. The roundness of the breasts shouldn't be wider than the width of her chest. I'm not trying to be creepy or anything but what's said is said. same
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Karima Narstrom
Joined: Nov 12, 2010
Galloping along the hilltop rode the Narstrom....
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 08:46 AM
Msg. 12 of 36
Keep talk of proportions out of this.
Thank you all for the compliments :), note I have to fix the fingers
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SlappyThePirate
Joined: Aug 24, 2009
You are irritating, I'll release nothing
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 09:02 AM
Msg. 13 of 36
I like it. It's curved but not overly streamlined or anything. The details are interesting, but they don't look spartan-y (perhaps not what you were going for anyway, or course). I want to say that the helmet looks unique, but it does remind me of something as someone's said already... Keep going with these. EDIT: Wish we had 3p animators, it would be great to have a new animation graph. Edited by SlappyThePirate on Aug 10, 2011 at 09:11 AM
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Jaz
Joined: Mar 21, 2010
[Insert sarcastic comment here]
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 09:10 AM
Msg. 14 of 36
Looks awesome. It'd be a great character for a campaign. She's like some kind of foreign supersoldier. Like a spartan from Africa or something(Note that I'm not being racist. There are racial differences in appearances. I know how much you guys love trolling -.-)
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Karima Narstrom
Joined: Nov 12, 2010
Galloping along the hilltop rode the Narstrom....
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 09:17 AM
Msg. 15 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: Jaz Looks awesome. It'd be a great character for a campaign. She's like some kind of foreign supersoldier. Like a spartan from Africa or something(Note that I'm not being racist. There are racial differences in appearances. I know how much you guys love trolling -.-) It's fine- I'm indian in real life, and I guess there is some influence in this armor; Hence the smooth armor and the tusks
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XlzQwerty1
Joined: Aug 6, 2009
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 09:24 AM
Msg. 16 of 36
INGAME NAO PLZ.
I love the armor, reminds me of some kind of anime. Seems really familiar...
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Higuy
Joined: Mar 6, 2007
@lucasgovatos
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 09:24 AM
Msg. 17 of 36
That's pretty cool, nice work. I like the colors too. Looks like some kinda of assassin, you should add the little things up on the back of her legs that were on the Half-Life assassins, they help protect from big falls. ^ the things on her leg Edited by Higuy on Aug 10, 2011 at 09:28 AM
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Aesthetics
Joined: May 3, 2011
A generally negative synonym for jötunn
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 09:26 AM
Msg. 18 of 36
Epic niceness, wim has hair
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Karima Narstrom
Joined: Nov 12, 2010
Galloping along the hilltop rode the Narstrom....
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 09:47 AM
Msg. 19 of 36
Thanks all- I want her to be agile and graceful, but I dont know if you can do that in the Halo engine. Maybe I'll work it into her animations. I might upload my Drunk Chief animation
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Dark Neon
Joined: Jun 8, 2009
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 10:01 AM
Msg. 20 of 36
The helmet kinda reminds me of the death mask from Mass Effect 2.
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Corvette19
Joined: Feb 27, 2007
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 10:21 AM
Msg. 21 of 36
Looks really awesome.
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Skidrow925
Joined: Mar 19, 2010
"ideological sense of respect and tact of a 5yo"
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 03:07 PM
Msg. 22 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: Higuy
That's pretty cool, nice work. I like the colors too. Looks like some kinda of assassin, you should add the little things up on the back of her legs that were on the Half-Life assassins, they help protect from big falls.
http://media.moddb.com/cache/images/mods/1/5/4384/thumb_620x2000/femassassin_beauty.jpg
^ the things on her leg
Edited by Higuy on Aug 10, 2011 at 09:28 AM Long fall boot's. And it looks really cool. The helmet remind's me of General Grievous from star wars. With a little clone in there. Personally I think it would look better if darker... maybe just lighting...
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abkarch
Joined: Mar 20, 2010
This account is old. Sorry for inappropriate posts
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 03:34 PM
Msg. 23 of 36
So many people think it resembles so many things from so many games...which means it looks original. good job, not many people manage stuff like this anymore
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Skidrow925
Joined: Mar 19, 2010
"ideological sense of respect and tact of a 5yo"
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 03:54 PM
Msg. 24 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: abkarch So many people think it resembles so many things from so many games...which means it looks original. good job, not many people manage stuff like this anymore This is true.
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Skidrow925
Joined: Mar 19, 2010
"ideological sense of respect and tact of a 5yo"
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 06:35 PM
Msg. 25 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: goldkilla88This look excellent! Its nice to see some real custom bipeds. Quote: --- Original message by: Higuy
That's pretty cool, nice work. I like the colors too. Looks like some kinda of assassin, you should add the little things up on the back of her legs that were on the Half-Life assassins, they help protect from big falls.
http://media.moddb.com/cache/images/mods/1/5/4384/thumb_620x2000/femassassin_beauty.jpg
^ the things on her leg
Edited by Higuy on Aug 10, 2011 at 09:28 AM Black Mesa Copied that off of Aperture Science! D: AND THATS JUST TERRIBLE!! Since when did Black Mesa hire the Government to come in and kill EVERYONE? Those assassin's weren't hired by Black Mesa... And The U.S. Government might have bought a contract with Aperture Science dba Aperture Laboratories ever thought of that?
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XlzQwerty1
Joined: Aug 6, 2009
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 07:07 PM
Msg. 26 of 36
Skidrow, you mustn't forget that Black Mesa and Aperture Laboratories were dear enemies of one another. Do anything to overtake the portal science.
BTW. Black Mesa was first, end of story. Edited by XlzQwerty1 on Aug 10, 2011 at 07:07 PM
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iHalo
Joined: Dec 5, 2009
Modeling ::Royal Carribean's Oasis of the Seas::
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 07:24 PM
Msg. 27 of 36
The helmet is most General Grievis form Star Wars... also It should be called FOXX, because it looks like one. :P
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Skidrow925
Joined: Mar 19, 2010
"ideological sense of respect and tact of a 5yo"
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 07:33 PM
Msg. 28 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: XlzQwerty1
Skidrow, you mustn't forget that Black Mesa and Aperture Laboratories were dear enemies of one another. Do anything to overtake the portal science.
BTW. Black Mesa was first, end of story. Edited by XlzQwerty1 on Aug 10, 2011 at 07:07 PM I know they were competitors... And Aperture started the 3 Tier in... late 70's, early 80's? And finished Tier 3 in what? '82? A Brief history of Aperture Science: Quote: 1953 – Aperture Science begins operations as a manufacturer of shower curtains. Early product line provides a very low-tech portal between the inside and outside of your shower. Very little science is actually involved. The name is chosen to make the curtains appear more hygienic.
1956 – Eisenhower administration awards Aperture a contract to provide shower curtains to all branches of the military except the Navy.
1957 - 1973 – Mostly shower curtains.
1974 – Aperture Founder and CEO, Cave Johnson, is exposed to mercury while secretly developing a dangerous mercury-injected rubber sheeting from which he plans to manufacture seven deadly shower curtains to be given as gifts to each member of the House Naval Appropriations committee.
1976 – Both of Cave Johnson’s kidneys fail. Brain damaged, dying, and incapable of being convinced that time is not now flowing backwards, Johnson lays out a three-tier R&D program. The results, he says, will “guarantee the continued success of Aperture Science far into the fast-approaching distant past.”
The Heimlich Counter-Maneuver – A reliable technique for interrupting the life-saving Heimlich Maneuver. The Take-A-Wish Foundation – A charitable organization that will purchase wishes from the parents of terminally ill children and redistribute them to wish-deprived but otherwise healthy adults. “Some kind of rip in the fabric of space…that would…well, it’d be like, I don’t know, something that would help with the shower curtains I guess. I haven’t worked this idea out as much as the wish-taking one.” 1981 – Diligent Aperture engineers complete the Heimlich Counter-Maneuver and Take-A-Wish Foundation initiatives. The company announces products related to the research in a lavish, televised ceremony. These products immediately become wildly unpopular. After a very public string of choking and despondent sick child disasters, senior company officials are summoned before a Senate investigative committee. During these proceedings, an engineer mentions that some progress has been made on "Tier 3", the “man-sized ad hoc quantum tunnel through physical space with possible applications as a shower curtain.” The committee is quickly and permanently recessed, and Aperture is granted an open-ended contract to continue research on the “Portal” and "Heimlich Counter-Maneuver" projects in secret.
1981-1985 – Work progresses on the “Portal” project. Several high ranking Fatah personnel choke to death on lamb chunks despite the intervention of their bodyguards.
1986 – Word reaches Aperture management that another defense contractor called Black Mesa is working on a similar portal technology. In response to this news, Aperture begins developing the Genetic Lifeform and Disk Operating System (GLaDOS), an artificially intelligent research assistant and disk operating system.
1996 – After a decade spent bringing the disk operating parts of GLaDOS to a state of more or less basic functionality, work begins on the Genetic Lifeform component.
1998 – The untested AI is activated for the first time as one of the planned activities on Aperture’s first annual bring-your-daughter-to-work day. In many ways, the initial test goes well: Within one picosecond of being switched on, GLaDOS becomes self-aware. The "going well" phase lasts for two more picoseconds, at which point GLaDOS takes control of the facility, locks everyone inside, and begins a permanent cycle of testing. Her goal: beat the hated Black Mesa in the race to develop a functioning portal technology. Days later, that race is lost when Black Mesa successfully deploys an interdimensional gate through which an alien race emerges and effectively ends the outside world. Aperture did it better. Black Mesa get's the world enslaved. Aperture make's shower curtains. Edited by Skidrow925 on Aug 10, 2011 at 07:35 PM
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Dennis

Joined: Jan 27, 2005
"We are made of starstuff.” ― Carl Sagan
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 08:21 PM
Msg. 29 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: Karima Narstrom No idea what I'll call it.
I call it pretty cool. I like the sleek lines of the helmet it still looks tough but has an air of femininity to it that is often lacking in Video game models. She looks as if she belongs fighting beside the ODST.
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Higuy
Joined: Mar 6, 2007
@lucasgovatos
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 08:32 PM
Msg. 30 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: goldkilla88
They copied the hard fall boots/things. Edited by goldkilla88 on Aug 10, 2011 at 06:37 PM Half Life 1 had them first!
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DarkHalo003
Joined: Mar 10, 2008
All ARs Need Green Little Buttons.
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 09:11 PM
Msg. 31 of 36
Reminds me of the Enclave from Fallout, but a more feminine and sleek version for assassinations.
Edited by DarkHalo003 on Aug 10, 2011 at 09:12 PM
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Karima Narstrom
Joined: Nov 12, 2010
Galloping along the hilltop rode the Narstrom....
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 09:27 PM
Msg. 32 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: DennisQuote: --- Original message by: Karima Narstrom No idea what I'll call it.
I call it pretty cool. I like the sleek lines of the helmet it still looks tough but has an air of femininity to it that is often lacking in Video game models. She looks as if she belongs fighting beside the ODST. Thank you Dennis; Also here is another random biped thast been sitting in my WIP foldder for forever. 
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XlzQwerty1
Joined: Aug 6, 2009
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 09:53 PM
Msg. 33 of 36
The face is kinda scary, and the chest, looks a bit odd. But I like how the robot looks overall.
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SlappyThePirate
Joined: Aug 24, 2009
You are irritating, I'll release nothing
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 10:21 PM
Msg. 34 of 36
Can I have that robot? I have an idea.
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Karima Narstrom
Joined: Nov 12, 2010
Galloping along the hilltop rode the Narstrom....
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Posted: Aug 10, 2011 10:44 PM
Msg. 35 of 36
Quote: --- Original message by: SlappyThePirate Can I have that robot? I have an idea. Sure; but it's not quite ready to leave the saftly of the WIP folder.
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