
sneak12
Joined: Aug 25, 2008
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Posted: May 15, 2011 12:53 AM
Msg. 1 of 9
So I've been working on a class project of a model of the UNSC Frigate from Halo: Reach. It's for a grade and thought I'd get the communities opinion. Crit, hate, flame, whatever it is you guys do now, I don't care. Just give me ideas that I could do to make it better. Not meant to be 100% replica. Just close enough. I made it in SolidWorks Office 2009. *For some reason halomaps doesn't like me linking images to ImageShack. You'll have to right click on them and click view image to see em.* Edited by sneak12 on May 15, 2011 at 12:57 AM
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MatthewDratt
Joined: Sep 11, 2010
TAKEDOWN IS OUT MattDratt.com
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Posted: May 15, 2011 01:15 AM
Msg. 2 of 9
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sneak12
Joined: Aug 25, 2008
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Posted: May 15, 2011 01:21 AM
Msg. 3 of 9
Thats the problem. I was D: Any who... thanks for fixing it.
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Slayer117
Joined: Oct 3, 2008
Host of CE3 2010-forever!
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Posted: May 15, 2011 03:54 AM
Msg. 4 of 9
looks great!
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Jesse
Joined: Jan 18, 2009
Discord: Holy Crust#4500
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Posted: May 15, 2011 09:02 PM
Msg. 5 of 9
Quote: --- Original message by: Tiel Looks a bit stubby mate.
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DarkHalo003
Joined: Mar 10, 2008
All ARs Need Green Little Buttons.
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Posted: May 15, 2011 09:22 PM
Msg. 6 of 9
Looks more disproportionate than stubby. Double-check your references and make sure the entire Frigate is the equally distributed among its different atriums. Other than that bit of criticism, very good job.
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Amazingcuziam
Joined: Apr 16, 2010
Sup.
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Posted: May 17, 2011 11:16 PM
Msg. 7 of 9
My crit ^ Experiment with it, try scaling all of it, and then just parts. Other than that, it looks fantastic! Well done :).
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sneak12
Joined: Aug 25, 2008
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Posted: Jun 9, 2011 01:06 AM
Msg. 8 of 9
If anyone was interested in knowing, I added some more detail to it. I won't post pics because the main size of the ship didn't change; I didn't have the time. My teacher ended up liking it A LOT so it was all good ;)
Other than that I plan to completely redo that back (possible front fixes that I ran into but didn't have the time to work out) this summer whenever I'm not doing college stuff.
Thanks for the crit, guys. I appreciate it.
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TauSigmaNova
Joined: Jan 31, 2011
If love is blind, I guess I'll buy myself a cane
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Posted: Jun 10, 2011 08:51 PM
Msg. 9 of 9
seen a similar model on the 3dw
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