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JHOW2
Joined: Jun 24, 2009

Don't got one.


Posted: Jun 29, 2009 10:19 PM    Msg. 1 of 6       
I have never tried forerunner stuff before so tell me what needs improvement. I have the detail level about where i want it for this map so DON'T say more detail. This is going to be about the size of sandtrap so i don't want lag. This is just a small part i have done so far. Just tell me what to do to make it look more forerunner.


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I guess i can't post images yet. Maybe in -1 days?

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f14/halorider/outerwall.png

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f14/halorider/walldiffuse.png


gruntfromhalo
Joined: Nov 21, 2007

actual loli


Posted: Jun 29, 2009 10:23 PM    Msg. 2 of 6       
I think it looks nice, but I've never been good at forerunner my self.


Advancebo
Joined: Jan 14, 2008


Posted: Jun 29, 2009 10:24 PM    Msg. 3 of 6       
Looks nice actually, maybe a different angle?
And you dont need that many chamfers on the wall.
Edited by Advancebo on Jun 29, 2009 at 10:25 PM


Higuy
Joined: Mar 6, 2007

@lucasgovatos


Posted: Jun 29, 2009 10:26 PM    Msg. 4 of 6       
I like the things in front. I don't like the wall though. Try making the roundish stuff a bit more forerunner, here was my take on it.

not thread jacking, just showing him to where he could improve..


JHOW2
Joined: Jun 24, 2009

Don't got one.


Posted: Jun 29, 2009 10:31 PM    Msg. 5 of 6       
Thanks those are what i was unsure on. I couldn't find any good references.

Here is a different angle.

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f14/halorider/different_angle.png


Advancebo
Joined: Jan 14, 2008


Posted: Jun 29, 2009 10:39 PM    Msg. 6 of 6       
The UV's on the circle part are different than the ones connecting it. Theres a seam where the half circle starts.

 

 
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