Quote: --- Original message by: Joshflighter
I dont really do this, but I went and tried it. Here is some things I believe should be changed to have a more pleasing outcome.

Hills:
Instead of making them come straight down, add some variation to them. For example, you might want to make some cuts in it, and move the vertices's back or forward and create a more natural shape.

UV errors:
Fix the UV errors on the mountains. They look stretched and because of such, they make it look bad.

Ground:
The textures are not good at all. They look like dots on the ground. Get a high-res texture of grass and replace the current one. Make sure its not stretched either, because that might be the cause of the problem.

Map:
In my opinion, I think you may want to add some sort of structures to add to something more pleasing when playing.

Game-play:
Add different objects around the map. This could be creates or something that allows the player or players to be hidden from the enemy or take cover when be attacked. Right now I see snipers laying around and Rocket launchers. This will cause spree's of such scale it will get boring to play cause you can see a player from one side to the other, and nothing to protect him/her. So that's my suggestion.

Overall:
I dunno, its a pretty good try, but I think you should add some stuff to it to make it nicer. For the next map you should focus more on the detail and game-play of how to will play out and look when done. Hope this somewhat helps. :)