My Battle rifle i'm modeling. =)



=)

The triangles are beveled in. Not all the way extruded. And I'm assuming your still making the scope? The grip needs more round.

Well atleast your actually doing SOMETHING now...lol

Good luck, and if you need help i'm good at scopes =)

that means alot dude thanks

this is my first really good looking model and i want it to look really good

so far it has less than 1k polies =D

That's good and bad. lol

You better actually finish this, unlike me =/

The Barrel sucks. Redo it.

i know, thats my main priority as of now. updates soon.

The Barrel sucks. Redo it.

I think it's fine.

Don't be an ass.

Oh that was helpful. I'm sure he knows what is wrong now.

I blame the render now.


Don't be a hypocrite. This is one of the only times I have been an ass to anyone here.
Edited by DarkHalo003 on Nov 4, 2008 at 06:05 PM

i'm not some soft lil kid who gets hurt easy
and i am immune to harsh critisizm. so carry on i'll let Dennis decide your fates

O i c wat u did thar
Edited by Officer egg on Nov 4, 2008 at 06:10 PM

Just learn to take it from someone that backs up their crit, even though it may be harsh. =)

Whatever. There IS something a bit odd about the barrel. you should recheck your refs. If I'm wrong, you can tell me harshly.

That's one time too many in my opinion.

Anyway, Hayabusa, the model is looking great but as it was already said, don't extrude in the triangles. Also, I think the barrel looks odd in the way that it is goes wider in the middle then smaller towards the end if you know what I mean.
Just keep it within the normal cylindrical shape, and obviously, keep the details on it too. But so far so good.

i'm not going to stoop as low as some individuals did so i wont tell anybody anything harsh. but thank you for your true opinion(s), i welcome and thank for that guys
Edited by Hayabusa12 on Nov 4, 2008 at 06:16 PM
Edited by Hayabusa12 on Nov 4, 2008 at 06:16 PM

Sigh, I won't even try. Anyways, the triangles are more rounded in the edges.

Chamfer ;)

Wow.. After I give crit, that normal people would give, we have an excitement of posts!

I couldn't help it...Post another render!

guys could we please get back on topic cuz i dont want this thread locked. or atleast too soon XD

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if its not too much trouble guys, i'll post it when its done so that i can worry about fixes after.
Edited by Hayabusa12 on Nov 4, 2008 at 06:25 PM

Thank you. I learn new ways to model every day. I thought it was smoothing.....

Hunter's barrel is exactly correct.
Edited by DarkHalo003 on Nov 4, 2008 at 06:29 PM

thanks hunter. i'll try =)

I just made a barrel like hunters in 2 minutes...you should be able to do it easy. =)

Make the scope nao!

DONE FOR NOW!



Hunter pls comment and tell me if anything looks odd

scope is too tiney, place where the barrels meet the gun needs to be a planar, and the grip needs to be smoothed

maybe he can chamfer the grip to make it rounder

grip is a box there are alot of non planers handel is pretty bad. overall its too boxy please fix this you have potential.

SCOPE...And its has this boxy and skiny feeling...Other then that great work so far keep it up.

lol the real modeler is SargentCruch. lmao he just wanted me to post it and say it was mine cuz he told me to. sorry everyone lol

Crappy joke was crappy...

take it away crunch the thread is ures now