
CorpseManTS
Joined: Nov 16, 2008
Sorry, I cant hear u with my bullet in your mouth!
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Posted: Jun 9, 2013 04:49 AM
Msg. 36 of 63
could be a Custom Hunter model though...
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Oskarmandude
Joined: Mar 16, 2013
Bosnia
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Posted: Jun 9, 2013 07:17 AM
Msg. 37 of 63
inb4 dratt says "0/10"
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P3
Joined: Dec 2, 2011
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Posted: Jun 9, 2013 07:26 AM
Msg. 38 of 63
Quote: --- Original message by: XtralaosQuote: --- Original message by: P3
I hate how my work gets so little comments or critiques. Also thanks Xtralaos and DoberDan. I think it would be pretty cool and funny seeing this guy ingame charging at you. XD
Edited by P3 on Jun 8, 2013 at 10:24 PM I'm not a good Critiquer, I can't even see a mistake in your drawing but I think that's because your new drawing is a creation, a Mix of covenant , so it does not really matter. -I like how you created your monster with a weak point, that being the belly and the "prophet chin". -Also, This being a massive monster, it is a bit weird to see a tank of around ...3-3.5 m with tiny hands. It doesn't really fit. Just imagine this monstruosity ingame, he is charging at you to attack you with what? a plasma riffle and his feet? -IMO I think it would be better to add a new set of Hands so he will have 4 and carry 3 weapons. OR you can erase the elite hand and add a brute one to carry a bigger weapon. -The shield is too tiny, if this is a creation coming from the Covenant, I think they could have created a bigger shield for him. With that, he can not protect his 2 weak points at the same time. Belly/Prophet Chin and Head. -You could have made the drone wings a lil' bit bigger, because with those he can't even get 2 cm in the air.Make them something like x1.5 from what is so he can be able to at least stand in the air like the covenant vehicle *Ghost*. But this is just a matter of choice. I have 2 questions: Why did you put a Prophet Chin right over there? Isn't the grunt stomach too weak to sustain all those killos?Edited by Xtralaos on Jun 9, 2013 at 04:22 AMEdited by Xtralaos on Jun 9, 2013 at 05:32 AM I will answer what i had bolded on your reply. The first one. Those were Jackal arms. The second one. Look at bumblebees. XD The third one. Because i thought it would be funny. XD The last one. I was overall just trying to fit every covenant into one. This guy i made was more meant as a joke anyway. :)
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Xtralaos
Joined: Jun 1, 2013
"I AM THE GREATEST!"
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Posted: Jun 9, 2013 08:04 AM
Msg. 39 of 63
Quote: --- Original message by: P3Quote: --- Original message by: XtralaosQuote: --- Original message by: P3
I hate how my work gets so little comments or critiques. Also thanks Xtralaos and DoberDan. I think it would be pretty cool and funny seeing this guy ingame charging at you. XD
Edited by P3 on Jun 8, 2013 at 10:24 PM I'm not a good Critiquer, I can't even see a mistake in your drawing but I think that's because your new drawing is a creation, a Mix of covenant , so it does not really matter. -I like how you created your monster with a weak point, that being the belly and the "prophet chin". -Also, This being a massive monster, it is a bit weird to see a tank of around ...3-3.5 m with tiny hands. It doesn't really fit. Just imagine this monstruosity ingame, he is charging at you to attack you with what? a plasma riffle and his feet? -IMO I think it would be better to add a new set of Hands so he will have 4 and carry 3 weapons. OR you can erase the elite hand and add a brute one to carry a bigger weapon. -The shield is too tiny, if this is a creation coming from the Covenant, I think they could have created a bigger shield for him. With that, he can not protect his 2 weak points at the same time. Belly/Prophet Chin and Head. -You could have made the drone wings a lil' bit bigger, because with those he can't even get 2 cm in the air.Make them something like x1.5 from what is so he can be able to at least stand in the air like the covenant vehicle *Ghost*. But this is just a matter of choice. I have 2 questions: Why did you put a Prophet Chin right over there? Isn't the grunt stomach too weak to sustain all those killos?Edited by Xtralaos on Jun 9, 2013 at 04:22 AMEdited by Xtralaos on Jun 9, 2013 at 05:32 AM I will answer what i had bolded on your reply. The first one. Those were Jackal arms. The second one. Look at bumblebees. XD The third one. Because i thought it would be funny. XD The last one. I was overall just trying to fit every covenant into one. This guy i made was more meant as a joke anyway. :) I see, but, this joke, can become a cool enemy into a mod if someone could spend his/her time modeling this. Bumblebees are tiny, this has at least half a ton, I don't see those wings sustaining that weight in air. This a new weapon concept art that I made in rush, sorry for the bad quality of the pic but I don't have a scanner -It's a combination between MA5 series and Plasma Repeater. I thought, after so many years of Cov-Human war, we managed to copy some of the covenants tehnology and make ourselves a plasma rifle. Instead of the barrel, there are those 4 cilinders from where plasma gets shot. they rotate so that means the rifle has a high fire rate. -The Battery life is shorter or the same as the Plasma Riffle but it will get empty fast because of the fire rate. -The Battery can be changed and once you get the battery out (in game speaking) your battery life does not stack with the other batteries you have. -In the display, there is shown the battery life, the North, and the heat sistem. -There are lights placed on the weapon, so when your battery is empty or you reload ,the lights are off. Edited by Xtralaos on Jun 9, 2013 at 09:43 AMEdited by Xtralaos on Jun 9, 2013 at 09:45 AM
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Wesker
Joined: Jun 8, 2011
Your Future Hinges upon This Fight!!!
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Posted: Jun 12, 2013 09:31 PM
Msg. 40 of 63
xtralaos, thank you for sharing your art, for your first posted image i just want to criticize the armor's values consistency, you put more work onto one area of the armor then the other, when you do that the drawing's values look incomplete. I like thearmor's left should plate the best, so if you can make the rest of the armor look like that its perfect imo.
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Xtralaos
Joined: Jun 1, 2013
"I AM THE GREATEST!"
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Posted: Jun 13, 2013 06:55 AM
Msg. 41 of 63
Quote: --- Original message by: Wesker xtralaos, thank you for sharing your art, for your first posted image i just want to criticize the armor's values consistency, you put more work onto one area of the armor then the other, when you do that the drawing's values look incomplete. I like thearmor's left should plate the best, so if you can make the rest of the armor look like that its perfect imo. Little detail is shown for the left shoulder plate, so , how will it look perfect if I do that?
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R93_Sniper
Joined: Feb 13, 2011
When in Doubt, RUN!
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Posted: Jun 14, 2013 03:47 AM
Msg. 42 of 63
Though my physical drawing skill is very...poor, can I put 3D art in here instead? It's still Fan Art right?
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Xtralaos
Joined: Jun 1, 2013
"I AM THE GREATEST!"
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Posted: Jun 14, 2013 05:14 AM
Msg. 43 of 63
Quote: --- Original message by: R93_Sniper Though my physical drawing skill is very...poor, can I put 3D art in here instead? It's still Fan Art right? Ofc. you can.
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Wesker
Joined: Jun 8, 2011
Your Future Hinges upon This Fight!!!
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Posted: Jun 16, 2013 03:03 AM
Msg. 44 of 63
not the chief's left, my bad
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R93_Sniper
Joined: Feb 13, 2011
When in Doubt, RUN!
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Posted: Jun 16, 2013 04:53 PM
Msg. 45 of 63
Made my own little banner and then I made a more expanded version with some other characters Comments and Suggestions?
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Xtralaos
Joined: Jun 1, 2013
"I AM THE GREATEST!"
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Posted: Jun 16, 2013 04:58 PM
Msg. 46 of 63
Looks Awesome. If those are your models, you are very talented. The banner could have some more background detail :D.
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R93_Sniper
Joined: Feb 13, 2011
When in Doubt, RUN!
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Posted: Jun 16, 2013 05:00 PM
Msg. 47 of 63
Mix/Matched models with custom coloring and decals, nothing special
I was planning on photoshopping in a decal to match the background, just never decided to
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DoberDan
Joined: Jun 6, 2013
The dog that barks, doesn't bite.
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Posted: Jun 16, 2013 05:02 PM
Msg. 48 of 63
They are awesome ! Could you perhaps consider trying to create a model for Xtralaos's concept weapon? That would be BAWS ! Edited by DoberDan on Jun 16, 2013 at 05:06 PM
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master noob
Joined: Aug 10, 2012
343Industries Advocate
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Posted: Jun 16, 2013 05:02 PM
Msg. 49 of 63
employ better rendering techniques(reflections, specular, lighting, etc) maybe add color correction background needs detail other than that, use shadows or fog to enhance the depth, otherwise the models blend into each other. also, don't be afraid to tessellate the closer models to get rid of jagged edges; be wary of UVs however.
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xnx
Joined: Feb 12, 2013
h2 marine anims or i detonate the vest
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Posted: Jun 16, 2013 05:16 PM
Msg. 50 of 63
This morning I doodled this, and then scanned and colored it later in the day.  WORT WORT WORT
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Higuy
Joined: Mar 6, 2007
@lucasgovatos
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Posted: Jun 16, 2013 07:40 PM
Msg. 51 of 63
It's nice for a little sketch! You could work on the form a bit though (shapes and body proportions). Detail isn't everything but getting down correct shapes improves work a lot. I like the colors too btw.
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Xtralaos
Joined: Jun 1, 2013
"I AM THE GREATEST!"
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Posted: Jun 17, 2013 07:20 AM
Msg. 52 of 63
I could really use some lessons for coloring as I can't find some good ones nowhere on the internet. Would you be able to find some time and teach me?
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P3
Joined: Dec 2, 2011
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Posted: Jun 18, 2013 07:59 AM
Msg. 53 of 63
I made this a while back for a teacher. I know it isn't really good because some things don't look right and needs a lot of fixing. I'm not working on it anymore so I'm just going to show it here. I made it using a mouse and not a tablet.... Sadly.... :( 
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DoberDan
Joined: Jun 6, 2013
The dog that barks, doesn't bite.
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Posted: Jun 18, 2013 08:01 AM
Msg. 54 of 63
You made this using just a mouse? Holy sandals, you're one of a kind !
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P3
Joined: Dec 2, 2011
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Posted: Jun 18, 2013 08:06 AM
Msg. 55 of 63
Oh. I forgot. I also drew the base outlines with a pencil first and then I added color and detail with gimp. Edited by P3 on Jun 18, 2013 at 08:07 AM
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DoberDan
Joined: Jun 6, 2013
The dog that barks, doesn't bite.
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Posted: Jun 18, 2013 08:10 AM
Msg. 56 of 63
Really talented people on this thread. Xtralaos triggered a nice chain of hidden talents haha.
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Xtralaos
Joined: Jun 1, 2013
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Posted: Jun 18, 2013 11:57 AM
Msg. 57 of 63
I think I saw that one somewhere else, I am not sure where....
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master noob
Joined: Aug 10, 2012
343Industries Advocate
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Posted: Jun 18, 2013 04:50 PM
Msg. 58 of 63
very rough and overshaded, but random concept for elite armor.
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DoberDan
Joined: Jun 6, 2013
The dog that barks, doesn't bite.
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Posted: Jun 18, 2013 04:52 PM
Msg. 59 of 63
Reminds me of Alex Mercer's armor from Prototype for some reason! Haha.
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Xtralaos
Joined: Jun 1, 2013
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Posted: Jun 18, 2013 05:14 PM
Msg. 60 of 63
Awesome Drawing. Can you finish it? :D
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master noob
Joined: Aug 10, 2012
343Industries Advocate
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Posted: Jun 18, 2013 05:15 PM
Msg. 61 of 63
Quote: --- Original message by: Xtralaos Awesome Drawing. Can you finish it? :D probs going to redraw it and shade it digitally.
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DoberDan
Joined: Jun 6, 2013
The dog that barks, doesn't bite.
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Posted: Jun 18, 2013 07:00 PM
Msg. 62 of 63
That would be awesome !
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P3
Joined: Dec 2, 2011
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Posted: Jun 18, 2013 08:29 PM
Msg. 63 of 63
Quote: --- Original message by: Xtralaos I think I saw that one somewhere else, I am not sure where.... Magazine maybe? If so, then my teacher did submit it. :3 Also, it may also be because the master chief pose was based off of another picture; the arbiter was too. My teacher (Not an art teacher or anything, just a teacher who was a fan of Halo) found pictures of the arbiter and master chief and wanted me to put them together, so i did this.
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