Hello, Howdy, HI!
I have been working on this for 2 days... it started as a bus idea with 2 cliffs with bases on either side but as I started modeling it, the plans grew into this...

and...

more pics bellow.

anyways, I would like some crit on this plz. and the cliffs are undetailed because imma doing that as you read this.

(btw... yesh, it is that high-ish poly model I was talkin' about in the other thread. the error is resolved though :D)

pics...
http://i1243.photobucket.com/albums/gg551/hobbet360/happy_snap_10.png
http://i1243.photobucket.com/albums/gg551/hobbet360/happy_snap_09.png
http://i1243.photobucket.com/albums/gg551/hobbet360/happy_snap_08.png
http://i1243.photobucket.com/albums/gg551/hobbet360/happy_snap_07.png
http://i1243.photobucket.com/albums/gg551/hobbet360/happy_snap_06.png
http://i1243.photobucket.com/albums/gg551/hobbet360/happy_snap_05.png
http://i1243.photobucket.com/albums/gg551/hobbet360/happy_snap_04.png
http://i1243.photobucket.com/albums/gg551/hobbet360/2-1.png
http://i1243.photobucket.com/albums/gg551/hobbet360/1-1.png

some of them are from yesterday when I hadnt added some of the stuffs.

-cheers Hobbey360 ;D

where's the grunt launcher?

hiding... ... O que es???

Hi, hello, привет

looking not bad at all so far, you mentioned you are still working on details so
lets see what it turns out like :)

This actually looks like a clever idea you got there. With some polishing, and looking over the gameplay design thoroughly, you got yourself a beast..sort of,

hello again, I got updates with goodly and badly news. D:D (<--dunno what to choose)

anywhom, good news first because it brings the climatic effect into place before a disasterous anticlimax. I have finished one side of the cliffs (detail wise) i did as MR. Hiralis said and touched every blue berry. - looks zexier than before. I would post a pic or 10 but im going to bed now.

BAD NEWS D:
-I came across an open edge error in the sky... so I fixed it... exported it (took an hour), found another open edge. this time I was sure I fixed everything. exported (another hour wasted) open edge at the bottom of the world... I could keep going but I would explain my entire life since 5pm last night (EST) and it still wont fix. i then tried toolio... gives me an error saying this...

error couldnt build bsp because of overlapping surfaces (orange).
error couldnt build bsp2d.
error couldnt build leaf.
warining found nearly coplanar surfaces (red and green).
reducing collision bsp...
eax
ebx
ecx
edx
edi )))) numbery jumbery everywhere after these things D:
esi
ebp
esp
eip
exeption halt in \import_collision_bsp\reduce_collision_bsp.c,208 ect. ect.

anywhom plz help while I sleep

GOODNIGHT EVERYBODIES!!
-Hobbet360 :D or... D:

http://forum.halomaps.org/index.cfm%3Fpage=topic&topicID=41997
it explains an overlapping surface error and how to find and fix it.

post a link when the map is done please

Pffff... Why do you always say to post a link when it's done. When it's done Ill post it to the site. Anywhoms I haven't been home mush the last few days but I have done 3/4 of all the cliff details and fixed most of the errors mentioned before, (thanks ally).

Looks very interesting. a very fast paced CTF game would be excellent here.

***UPDATE***
I'm back and have updated the map.
-Detailed the cliffs (mostly)
-added some walkways to get around on foot.
-fixed all errors mentioned above.
-gotten in game :D

-made a progression video in my excitement.

Fount here ---> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6oFAeGSjjjw&feature=youtu.be

The cliffs aren't final, they are still a bit odd.

-Hobbet360

nice cliffs

Thanks, I think it still needs alot of work I must say.

inB4 everyone... Damn I can't read my own post

Those cliffs really look bad. At least use noise modifier to make them look more random.

You sir dont know anything about 3d modeling. Those are unused complanar faces on cliffs, they would be more useful if they would make a 3d shape.

Thanks for the feedback, methinks it looks alot better now, thanks. Ill post pics when it finishes exporting through chimp.

:)