i made a needle gun model whichi made (i know its crappy but its start) aswell i build up a countdown like map to play with my friends but i want to know what do you think of this two things
im open to be criticized as far as you are saying a constructive critic if you are not
please avoid to post here



bsp (crappy shaders- need to fix)
http://www.xfire.com/video/563ccd/

By the looks of it, you're just beginning as a modeler. Best advice: work on things more and more (including that gun, work as hard as you can to improve it). And when you're done with that gun and those other things? Scrap them (or keep them for memories if you'd like). Do not release your beginning models. It is a mistake most people make which only serves two purposes: 1. you are putting forth useless content which no one wants (they're some of your first models, no need to be offended by that) and 2. when people see them, they may consciously realize that you are a beginner and thus not judge harshly, but you are still giving them a bad impression of yourself; even without realizing it, when they see models of yours that are finally decent, they will remember your first ones and that will subconsciously dilute their opinions of you.

So keep practicing. Just please, for your own sake, keep your practice to yourself. Show your friends and family, but do not show the public. I know that I regret releasing my first attempts at AI and scripting.

I will judge the model if I please, young man. My idea for the needle gun is, in fact, an acceptable model; and that model is far from acceptable as a model for any weapon.

I assume he is male. Do you know otherwise?

More lighthearted than derogatory.

Tone is important and it's impossible to convey tone through text. So I suppose it has a 50% chance of being interpreted either way without clarification.

I understand "kid" though I say "son" during a more eye-to-eye situation without intending condescension.

Uhh, I'll just.. nevermind.

Good start on the model, and add more details and put in the little indents.
Will probably take a while but that's modelling.

*Spartan314* "CU-CU-CU-COMBO BREAKER!!" ..........

I will help you if you want.

when did everyone posted on the thread
and yes i need to do more complex modelling in that i agree but i was like ok i have no issue with this im new and if someone trolls me no prob
but any tutorials you might give me
and uvwmapping please