Well im still a noob at making custom weapons but im learning watch this vid tell me what you think.

http://www.xfire.com/video/3b1e99/

cool or lame?

smooth the handle and i will be

It needs more detail. You have its basic shape, which looks good, but you can tell that all the other details are just a texture, it makes it look flat.

the butt of the rifle looks kinda sharp. Would hurt if you put it at your shoulder and fired it.
anims make the rifle look like a light toy, maybe make them sway a little less when you move, and a little less recoil for shooting?
accuracy of rifle could be tweaked. A little more accuracy, say starts out with plasma rifle accuracy when initially fired for first second, then decreasing to AR worst accuracy by end of clip?

overall? seems okay for a beginner like you. nice job.
Edited by sargejohnson on Nov 19, 2010 at 07:08 AM

you know yourself yeeyayy smooth the edges mainly at the back end,i remember you first asking for a link to a modeling programe,wasn't long ago...your doing well keep it up

Yeeyay, you gotta use textures, not sideviews of a weapon :D

I like it. But why was there no sound? I didn't here the sound of it firing, or any of that stuff.

i did use unwrap and i didnt use side of a gun
and because i thought it would record sound but i guess it recorded my mic

http://forum.halomaps.org/index.cfm%3Fpage=topic&topicID=18013

your wood texture is really bad. either use some pre-made textures or learn how to make them properly.
Edited by HaloIsAHorribleGane on Nov 20, 2010 at 12:46 AM

OK criticize don't rip my f****** head off

it's a decent model, just fix the freaking wood.

I didn't rip your head off. if I wanted to rip your head off, it'd be something along these lines.

your model sucks. remake it. nothing about it is good. everything about it is absolutely horrible. there are no redeeming qualities to that model. you smell like a used condom. your family hates you. your friends are being murdered. your pets are being skinned alive. there is no god. you're going to hell. deal with it.

You got the shape really good... Model in the detail on the sides, and get a new wood texture.

alrighttttt